Candyland Isn't For Me
I watched myself, as if in a third person camera. i couldn't believe what i was seeing... was i really doing that? i watched horrified and tried desperately to grab hold of myself. my mind raced as i moved back into my body.
Not So Retired Any More XXIV
We just have to um...plan for a third person." tasha nodded slowly, then looked down her bare chest, blushing despite their year of being together.
Bitterwall Storys - Meeting Sally - III
Salazar looked on the third person, waiting for another introduction and raised his eyebrows questioningly. the small guy raised his eyebrows too and spoke "i know what you think. i'm not a child and/or drunk."
Castaways - Chapter 5
I'm trying to stick with third-person omniscient narration for this because i want to portray feelings for both of the characters. please let me know what you think about it and how i'm doing.
Chapter Sixteen: Secret Reminders
:p (a/n: this chapter is from a third-person perspective. usual 'in-head' approach continues next chapter.) she stared at the note with bemusement the only remaining response.
Cotton Remnants
Most of this wacky slice-of-life affair has a third-person limited focus on glass, although it does also start with a first-person section featuring both mello and glass.
Havana or Hell, part three
The murderer was a zombie and so was the third person." "retrace your steps," replied burris. "you must go back to the convention and retrace your steps. find out what really happened." i think i nodded. concentrating was growing difficult.
Vivat Draco
(for grammar fans, "vivat" is the third person singular active present subjunctive of the verb "v?vere", "to live".) the acclamation "vivat rex" or "vivat regina" frequently are used in coronation ceremonies and anthems used in such ceremonies.
Reunion
Occasionally, the feline would relapse into his third person dialogue, but it was rare. hunter never knew why he had been like that, and frankly he didn't care. "yeah, my little brother can be quite bossy and rude.
The Great and Powerful Backstory!
The weeks went on and trixie finally started to find her confidence, it was noticed that she'd taken on iron will's habit of speaking in the third person at times, but thankfully she didn't try and make life lessons in to poorly worded rhymes.
Happy and Young
Frinkel was the third person chip had called to his team. "me!?" frinkel was surprised. he was sure he was going to be left out. "yeah! why not, haven't seen you play. if nothing else ya got like steel for bones or something right?
Adventurous Fox Ch 1 (A Slave's Fate)
I'm terribly sorry for the huge delay (almost 2 months :p), but i've been rewriting this story from third person into a first-person one plus there were a lot of things on my head thanks to still being at high school (yes i'm 19, but education works differently