Castaways - Chapter 5
I'm trying to stick with third-person omniscient narration for this because i want to portray feelings for both of the characters. please let me know what you think about it and how i'm doing.
Bitterwall Storys - Meeting Sally - III
Salazar looked on the third person, waiting for another introduction and raised his eyebrows questioningly. the small guy raised his eyebrows too and spoke "i know what you think. i'm not a child and/or drunk."
Chapter Sixteen: Secret Reminders
:p (a/n: this chapter is from a third-person perspective. usual 'in-head' approach continues next chapter.) she stared at the note with bemusement the only remaining response.
Vivat Draco
(for grammar fans, "vivat" is the third person singular active present subjunctive of the verb "v?vere", "to live".) the acclamation "vivat rex" or "vivat regina" frequently are used in coronation ceremonies and anthems used in such ceremonies.
Adventurous Fox Ch 1 (A Slave's Fate)
I'm terribly sorry for the huge delay (almost 2 months :p), but i've been rewriting this story from third person into a first-person one plus there were a lot of things on my head thanks to still being at high school (yes i'm 19, but education works differently
The Great and Powerful Backstory!
The weeks went on and trixie finally started to find her confidence, it was noticed that she'd taken on iron will's habit of speaking in the third person at times, but thankfully she didn't try and make life lessons in to poorly worded rhymes.
Reunion
Occasionally, the feline would relapse into his third person dialogue, but it was rare. hunter never knew why he had been like that, and frankly he didn't care. "yeah, my little brother can be quite bossy and rude.
Happy and Young
Frinkel was the third person chip had called to his team. "me!?" frinkel was surprised. he was sure he was going to be left out. "yeah! why not, haven't seen you play. if nothing else ya got like steel for bones or something right?
Anima Chapter 12
But why was it referring to kole in the third person? "you left just after dark why?" i sent it back. the same three dots went back and forth. this time it was a good 10 minutes of typing.
The Life and Soul of Rikh Ghanyr
He spoke of the other 4 gods in third person, is he some other immortal spirit? i have one mystery solved, only to be replaced by another... tomorrow, i'll ask cappo if there are any other figures in naga folk-lore, aside from the four (five?
The Gift: Introducing the Spirits, part 3 of 3
While the second and third personalities rarely strive to start trouble the first can be quite aggressive around other spirits, especially when they are near a human he has claimed as his... such as the protagonist.
Fanboys Squirm the Best
Did he just use the third-person? bulk continued, "it just saddens the bulk that he is up against such a weakling!" he pointed dramatically at bardok, sneering at the arbok.