A change in pace 2

As I was about to walk into the school I was daydreaming about what this day had in store for me. For some reason, I was overcome by this newfound feeling of extreme confidence that in all honesty I had never experienced before. Suddenly, though, my...

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JIH Chapter 3: A Snail's Pace

I turned to see if i was making any progress but the monster was somehow able to keep pace with me.

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First Furlong

"we run at our own pace. this is just the first furlong, after all." binky twitches her ears. "and there's so much more left to come."

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Beyond Mundane Horizons: A Change of Pace

First published in allasso, vol. 2: saudade (pink fox publications, 2012) also available in audio format, narrated by the author, on "the voice of dog" podcast at http://thevoice.dog/ **beyond mundane horizons: a change of pace** _by altivo overo&

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Time For A Change Of Pace-Chapter 1: The Meeting Of New Friends

#1 of time for a change of pace this is a new little thing i worked on while i was without internet for a while. the story involves a fox named nate and a bear named josh, both of whom meet up on a beach in this specific chapter.

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Time For A Change Of Pace-Chapter 2-Strange feelings and even stranger occurences

#2 of time for a change of pace after a short spell of debating whether or not to continue i decided i would keep this story going, as i enjoy writing and tbh i need something to do most of the time lol.

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INTELLIGENT LIFE

He huffed for a moment then resumed his pacing in front of the cage watching her with his yellow eyes that for a brief moment looked upon her soul.

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Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others

If you pause to explain everything in a story, you'll bring the flow and pacing of your story to a crawl, destroying any excitement or sense of urgency to events.

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Snowed In 2 - Unexpected Surprises 1

Kurt could feel her close to climax, but with the change in pace he wasn't as close as her. she kept humping at him as hard as she could and with just a couple more humps her whole body tightened as her release came.

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Departure

He's still up close, everyone else a few paces back. they're all waiting for those footsteps to get closer. everyone's stopped their pacing, their fidgeting. almost frozen in time, just waiting for it. the first figure comes into view.

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Antithesis, Like day...

But he restrained the instinct, forcing himself to keep pacing.

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