Heartless Dragon 2 Weapons of War(re-edited)
He was trying to build a replica of the dragons suits only he wanted to improve it to expose any mistakes. he never wanted to be part of this but he wanted to help all the dragons of any costs.
Red Sun and Moon Colliding: Chapter Zero
Dime has been improving again, with the knowledge we won't fail. i.. i think she's starting to take a liking to me; she always seems happier when we're together. and i think i like her too.
Little Wolf, Big Ordeal CH. 11 & 12
I knew i improved my swimming, but i didn't know how much you all improved yours. i needed to observe a bit, then wait a bit, and finally--' 'use the element of surprise to beat you, haha!' chuck squawked, finishing charlie's sentence.
A fear inside
Please comment so i can improve the poem to the whisper of light comeing throgh the dark mind. a world away but so close in time. i walk blindly on this road deep inside. i fall over past memorys throwing me off and down in so many ways.
The Eyes
Take a read and if you have one or two minutes add a comment about it so i can improve. i like hearing other people's thoughts. other then that more non poems will be coming soon. (in less then eight months. promise). enjoy the poem.
Poem #61: Dance with the Music
_dance with the music_ time is slowing and without knowing i fall into the sound enrapturing movement room for improvement look at what i've found so much beauty in the night i have lost my sense of right listen to the sounds of time fear
Speech 3. Perfection.
It leaves no room for imagination, and no space for ability, intelligence, or improvement. you could just call perfection a dead end; a condition of hopelessness.
A few random updates!
In fact i welcome any advice for ways to improve my stories and will take all of them into consideration.
A child's laughter
I do hope my poetry skills are improving :)
Is it 101 or 102 Dalmatians ? Part two
End of part two and don't forget to comment so i can improve on my stories.
North and South Chapter 14: Growing (Arc 7 Epilogue)
Kage only nodded in acknowledgment, staying ever silent and stoic despite his teammates enthusiasm to improve on their abilities. hageshi however, had his own statement to say. "i will improve on my own terms..."
Conundrum
How to relate when i have seen a thousand outcomes for a planet caught galaxies on fire and stopped time worked to improve my life by destroying my being these were mere child's play old and weak; hard to imagine my future