Writing Tips vol. 4

See how the isolated sentence contrasts with the surrounding text, bringing out the stark, bleak feeling of the scene? you can use that to really punch your point across.

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Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which a Loose End is Tied Up

As he scanned over his surroundings, taking small and cautious steps back to his horse, another dull thunk revealed another throwing knife embedded in a nearby tree trunk.

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Nala's Venture: The Floodlands

Thirst sated, she looked up to observe her surroundings. to her shock, but not incredible surprise, she recognized none of the landmarks surrounding her.

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the dark arts

"it would work if we weren't surrounded!" he shouted. "mystic sword art: double twirling vortex!" i threw one sword in front of me and it spun round the outside of the demons surrounding us.

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Hunting Death- Ambushed

And much to my own shame, i am so out of it and unaware of my surroundings that it's actually the bat that first notices that we are being surrounded. there is at least a dozen or two of these humans, all well enough armed.

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Elisyum: The Great Lords: Prelude

Besides he is surrounded by darkness... i believe it'll not be too long before he falls to evil." "i believe in him! he may be surrounded by darkness, but he is still bearer of a good heart!"

The Elder Scrolls V : Skyrim Chapter 3

He took a deep breath and closed his eyes as he revelled in the cold air that surrounded him. kassi'm chuckled slightly as he slowly rose to his knees.

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Triad's Sci-Fi Furry Book Chapter Two (Draft)

-- the ship on the tarmac was surrounded with vulpinasians when it landed.

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Chapter 19: An Intruder Is On A Loose.

Al looked at his surroundings and they were completely surrounded. "biyomon, make a path! palmon, cover our escape route! and also invite team!" biyomon and palmon receive a notice and accept it then began the task they were told to.

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Invane: ReTree

It was rather impossible to see anything surrounding us which was a surprise even for me. yet despite the forest being dark; it was also noisy.

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The Legend of Spyro: Path of Delusions Book VIII Chapter 11

Darkness is in you and it won't let go, it will surround you, pretend to be your friend, protect you.

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The Imp

Suddenly a loud snap envelopes the surrounding forest, low omnipresent growls being heard. your heart skips alive, fear and adrenaline overtaking your body as your fight or flight instincts take over.

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