A Child's Rage Chapter 2: Love and Hate
Silver watched as the scenery moved by. the trees blurred together by tears seemed to be crying as well. silver watched and remembered as he saw the cherry trees as petals fell.
Chapter One: A Fine How Do You Do
And think she did, sitting down in the grass and watching the wind play with the smoke, blowing it away and bunching it up.
Blood and Fuel
Lix hissed, squeezing her pilot's chair with her thighs as she watched the fire storm outside.
Making things right (Final)
His expression was unreadable as he watched them approach. tasuke took his seat and patted the empty spot beside him. yuki smirked, coiling herself next to him without hesitation.
The Last Dragon part 2
He watched as she pranced off towards the clearing, where the flowers he'd mentioned grew.
The Rose of the Desert and the Holder of the Storm
\* \* \* "haa, that was tough," said celia in her native tongue as she watched her master leave, allowing herself to pant now that he was no longer watching her. "we've never trained like that before."
The Wolf Mother's New Child
Aidan looked at his mate, telling her to stay and watch over the human. sure it would be harder to hunt, but someone needed to stay and watch over the...cub? yes. something in aidan's mind was telling him that the human was his cub.
Child of the Wasteland - Chapter 1
He watched her with cold eyes, it wasn't the reaction he'd expected but it was an interesting one nonetheless. as she stopped talking he found himself smiling a little. "wrong, the one law is watch your own back.
Scales and Honor- Viridian Night: Chapter 4
She quickly and silently followed the green dragon, darting from tree to tree until she watched them land in a clearing of grass.
Cowed
Bateman slowly replaced the phone on it's cradle as he watched.
Writing Tips
watch your tenses! there is nothing more irritating than reading a passage that flips its verbs all over the place. poor verbs! they don't know what's happening, and neither do your readers.
Alice Dippleblack in The Jellybane Ch5
Alice and twinkaleni watch as she cuts a few low branches and then goes to another to do the same.