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, their beliefs others who supported their friends and provided relief we all have our books, the novels ever being written of our lives and even of the lovers to which we were smitten though some chose to live alone, it did not diminish the critical
Misplaced Muse
Constructive criticism would be very much welcome :3 edit: why does it look like a paragraph when i put it in nice looking stanzas .____. attempts to fix edit2: yay it's fixed now!
Forgotten Ch. 2
Coments and criticism please and thank youz =] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- my mind was dazed and i couldn't help but keep my thoughts focused on him. my only desire then was to be with him
The Ideal Furry
-doesn't resent the human race -doesn't depict "anthros" as the pinnacle of purity and overall good-guyness - accepts all forms of criticism no matter how harsh - honestly tries to improve their work - tries to finish their
Counter Earth Chronicles Chapter 144: It Isn’t The World That Is Messed Up It Is Those Of Us Who Are In It (All Of Our Tomorrows Were Yesterday Part Five)
The warriors caught their target and brought her back inside the meeting room to join the master's other critics who attended his mock get-together which was really a ruse to eliminate his critics by wiping their minds.
Wander over Yonder: The Frozen Princess
"_artificial intelligence systems are... critically damaged._" the voice didn't sound all that intelligent to sylvia. she assumed that the "critical damage" had caused the ships intelligence to be... well... less than intelligent.
Chapter 27: Determination! Altered Evolution!
I do accept any critics and comments. and most of all thank you for those who participate and help in my story.
Surface (Chapter 3)
- ugh, i wasn't saying that to criticize your work. - i know, that's just what it felt like there for a minute. - well, okay, it was. you don't have to act so singled out, you know i believe in applying critical thinking to literally everything.
Hunter of Worlds: Phase1-Chapter8
Obviously accesories like a shoulder holster and other trinkets were not critical to his performance, but they certainly would be nice to have. bullets were definitely a must.
Invading Will Chapter 19
She was too critical, and she did demand too much from those around her. deanna pushed raogothcar away from them, and now their situation had gotten worse because of it.
The Tales of HTFC - Medic 4908 - Adam
John had done a pretty good job stopping up the blood, but he was still critical. as the nurse ran up to me, i signed the paper.
Matheau and Beijore XXI:: Failed Flight
Ideas, requests, and constructive criticism are always welcome. aurokhan had not slept a wink the night before. he had far too much on his mind.