A new pet
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Little Wings of the Storm
I like it, but on personal review, i just don't think i did a very good job. meh, not bad enough not to share; i want to improve, don't i? anyway, if you have something to say about my work, go ahead and tell me!
the adventures of voi
Authors note: this was the first chapter of a story that ive been working on for awhile now. plz review i crave constructive criticism. if anyone was wondering where i got the name voi from my friend told me voi means mind in greek and like the idiot i am
Kamuzu's biograpby
In one of the rehearsals, before the performance, his trainer was reviewing everything before and suddenly began to collapse. the delphox quickly rescued him, pushing him to save him from danger.
Wind of Change: Chapter 37
It started slow, reviewing everything from the first bang to what would come, up to the point where the final catalogued event would unfold. as a fourth-dimensional being, time was an abstract concept, and going back and forth did not hurt anyone.
Zethorak the Demon Queen
After patches and i reviewed the documents, she went into her room and told me to get some sleep before the sun rises. today, i would begin my training.
Shadows REturning: Chapter 4
Arriving at my room, nivek spoke with the doctor's voice saying, "hi, there i am here to review your charts really fast, and then to administer the sedative so that you can rest up. okay?" i responded, "no!
Chapter 2: Day Two
After a moment, he headed to the rec park down the trail, reviewing in his mind the things he had planned for his day off. felix found a small waterfall, checked its temperature, and stepped under.
Iron Jewlery (Otherwise Untitled)
~ after two days of carefully reviewing the same manifests, the weekly calendar, and the selection of magazines, detective clip decided it was time to opt for a holiday.
Chapter 5: Silence
After reviewing his purchases, both business and personal, and confirming that they'd be delivered next monday, he tossed his tablet aside and rolled his neck. checking the time, he realized that it was almost two in the morning.
Hijinks
He had never really bought into the series before but decided to have taken the dive since the game was getting rave reviews at school since the nintendo direct. today was release day and he had gotten release day delivery to his house.
Ship's Travel (Otherwise Untitled)
Anyone who discovers what happened to the night shift will be given the remaining three inflatable beach balls that fell out of that defective crate last year.", pausing to review his data pad.