I'm almost done!?
**As of right now, I'm almost done with my rough draft of my first story. I think it's OK. But I really would appreciate it if I could get your thoughts on my story.**
Interview with a Micro
The meeting place was a bar, called "the Jubilation." It was a small, lonely little place at the end of the block, extremely gloomy, though no place was exactly cheery anymore. The acts of terrorism, carried out by the Micro Liberation Army (MLA), had...
First Steps: The Way It Is
The big, muscly, black furred wolf sighed softly and ran his paw through his hair before leaning against me and wrapping his arms around my body. "aww. why are you crying?'
Smoke: 'Just Droppin' In'
The smoke slowly faded away and i soon spotted a tall, muscly orca looking at me with anger and disbelief. i drew a desert eagle and pointed it at him. "mc krein sends his regards." - i said with a grin.
In Your Arms (Part One)
He wasn't really that muscly and didn't have a six pack but who said you had to be muscly to be hot? this guy certainly was. he head me swing open the door and opened his eyes a crack a muttered a small, 'hello.'
Abducted by 'The Dino's': chapter 2 A New Bounty
Jack slowly looked up and saw that the foot belonged to a massive twenty five foot tall muscly built t-rex, the massive predator that was wearing a black short sleeve t-shirt and blue jeans.
First Steps: Bullet Proof, I Wish I Was (Chapter Nine Bad Version)
After a few seconds it swung open revealing a huge, middle aged, white wolf wearing a tight came green shirt that easily showed his muscly abs beneath it. taro's dad of course. i could easily tell where taro got his looks from.
Alone
Of his paddock and his oats. no not since i'd sold the aging gelding a week ago to a nearby miller for thrupence, barely half of what he was worth and now it was only his memory that clopped the springy carpet of fallen pine needles behind me, his great muscly
In Your Arms (Part 2)
Along with the muscly cheetah was his incredibly good-looking cousin shane who's white leopard fur was all over the place. i eyed my hot crush before averting my gaze to jack who was already looking at me, a twinkle in his eye.
Pre-Summer Fun - Part 1
The big gator was about seven and a half feet tall, he had a muscle gut and a muscly build wearing nothing but boxers but he makes the cutest face when you freak him out. "calm down big guy." i answered casually as i closed the door.
The Big Bully! Typhlosion VS Emboar!
He was also famous for his muscly looks, every time he steps outside his home, all the pokemon in his neighborhood (and sometimes, even the town) ran up to him so the pokemon could touch his muscles. but today will be different for matthew.
A Draconic Dream
, longer and longer as new bones grow, the pop pop pop and crack crack crack as spine and accompanying collumn grow, rubbing into the underside of the creature above me, making excrutiating pain as raw newborn nerves ram into a stomach of solid, rippling musces
The Item, Appraised
His thick, muscly body, drenched in sweat from the night's event, glistened in the light radiating from the fixtures. he remained silent while the black feathered avian reminisced about the sale.
Abducted by 'The Dino's': chapter 1 The Target and Double Crossed
The raptor wore a black tank top and blue jeans with a brown belt which had a raptor skull insignia on the belt buckle, the raptor had his arms crossed over his chest showing off his huge biceps and probably the rest of him was just as muscly.