Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
Consider the ways you can do that in your writing, and you'll build up compelling, exciting scenes that are well-paced and don't get slowed down by too much information. not everything needs to be explained.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 172
There was a dull ache pounding behind his eyes, throbbing in time with his heartbeat, and an all-consuming heat building up inside his chest, going from red to white-hot.
Visit With The Felines
The tigress squished me around in her maw with her tongue, i could tell she was building up saliva. i was in lots and lots of her saliva. the tigress then looked down the lioness' maw then she spat me into the lioness' maw.
Titanfall: blaze of glory
Troy unbuckled his straps as best he can, struggling to find the unhooking mechanism while smoke was building up inside the cockpit.
The Heat Is on In Saigon
He was sweating a bit, slipping out would be easy, but it was building up his appetite, when he decided to play for keeps and open his eyes he stared into the gaze of the snake. the mongoose was motionless for a moment, then a smile crept onto his lips.
Kingdom Animalia
After what felt like an eternity of the note being held out there was silence once more, the tension of the crowd was building up as a cheer started to build up in every one of their chests.
The Dance of Winter
Her body is still colder than mine, but only heat is building up inside of me when she's this close to me. i drape my free hand around her lower back. i whisper into her ear "ready to continue our dance?" she responds, "always."
The Need of a Mate
When she continued her licking, she had a sensation building up in her loins. she desperately continued to lick her cunt, wanting more of the wonderful sensation that dwelled within her cunt.
The Deer Trance
He hated being alone but, being isolated from humanity would help him release all the pent stress that was building up inside, and free his mind. after walking through mud and tripping over a few twigs, he found a nice smooth stump to rest on.
Happy Husky Park (Anthro Horse TF/TG)
At jack's chest, two mounds began to build up, eventually forming into a pair of breasts of generous size. his back went into an arch while waist caved inward.
His First Chapter
He felt anger and frustration building up inside of him. he needed to let it out. he stood up, cupped his hands around his mouth and shouted. "aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" he screamed as loud as he could, listening to his own echo.
The Tender Heart 3-Reunion
Okay." he stepped back and started digging a little down, scooping out the dry sand in a semicircle, packing in some of the mixed sand as he went to keep the walls from sliding back down and looking like crap as he went around the castle, watching jayde build up