Writing Tips
Description of where the people and objects are is key. if you want to give a good idea of what is happening, make sure your audience knows where the characters are in relation to each other.
Lizzard men
Rob held the object up for all to see. "this is whats up. one of the villagers brought it to me." they began to examine the object with as much interest as rob had. mark picked the disk up and began to closely observe the writing on it.
Vari Points of View and Mindset - Beta
Keep objective facts and opinions to yourself so long as they do not directly affect your own being.
Future Vision: Chapter 2
The difference between the two is that anadine has a very hard, reactive surface tension, and the faster something collides into it, the less the object can penetrate it.
Ze'Tazz - Conception
The object itself now glowed bright enough to light the room with a dull luminance. as the night wore on the two fell asleep. the tellion's eyes slowly drifted lower while watching his keepers.
Silver Stream Memory 21
She then threw an object out of it before us. the object stretched and yawed until it was a big round blobous mass. the mass sprouted a small round blob up to of it with two small black eyes. its mouth was a small slit on its body front.
How To Invoke
objects call to you. gold dust glinting inside a vial; a musty feather you found, likely from an eagle; polished lumps of carnelian and opal; a pack of playing cards thoroughly shuffled, made mysterious.
City Sector Uplift part 10
A second bolt of lighting flashing near the sector gave him an even better look, and he saw that it wasn't just one object. rather, there were dozens of smaller objects floating close together in a cluster, all with uneven round shapes.
Voyager: Prologue
It had gone farther than any other manmade object. but, still there and using inertia to continue its journey into the black void. it was here that it finally succeeded in its mission.
A Krystal Encounter Ch.1: A Staff in the Grass
At the end of it was an object that was sort of pinecone shaped and was also gold. i picked it up, examined it closely and began twirling it in my hands.
A New Light -- Prologue: Hunted
The position looked unquestionably miserable, and that was before they affixed the same object that clamped her snout shut onto his.
A Guardian Friend
“A drink?” The alligator opened the mini-fridge and showed the wolf its contents. “There’s cider, soft drinks, sparkling water…” “I’ll pass, haha,” Decro said. “Water helps with motion sickness.” Very grabbed a glass bottle of Prisal mineral water...