You promised.... (Teaser)
Outside of his stupor, paramedics were lifting the critically injured wolf onto a stretcher. police and firefighers were desperately working on the other twisted pile of metal that had been, until a few minutes prior- a car.
Team Smartz Ch.1 - Lucky Penny
Comments & critiques are appreciated (i want real, constructive criticism dammit!)
Road Crew - Ch. 1 - Here and now
Comments, suggestions, pointing out errors, criticism and anything in between is very welcome. i might be a decent proofreader, but probably failed with my own writing. anyway, here we go!
The Stranger in the Winds
Constructive criticism is welcome.)
Dungeons & Adders CH11
"avast ye, kassa.", a grey rat asked, looking the new group over critically. "who are these scum?" "new recruits.", the ferret asked, daring not to warn his fellow vermin with a disguised squirrel's knife held against his back.
PMD: Ventures of Beyond CH:1
I hope you enjoy the chapter but if you don't then some constructive criticism doesn't hurt. as nice as it would be i do not own pokemon. i did however create the characters and the written story below.
Ryan's Life
This is my first story so feel free to give me some criticism haha. well i do believe i will continue this story as soon as i get the time. a very sleep deprived drake named ryan woke up sometime in the afternoon.
Second Chance
(( comic project i am working on, basically i'm looking for advice/constructive criticism on the pacing, is this interesting? does it grab your attention? and any advice better writers might be able to give me.
Rajirra Beach PaintWear Fic
But there are critics..." "oh poo. jealous women only and not-steady-hands. my salons, opening throughout cyrodiil, have talented application specialists that provide services needed." "and the issue of hygene?" "hygene? we are khajiits you see?!
Call Me By Your Name Review
This is where a lot of the themes of sensuality many critics spoke about came to fruition.
Mew's love Pt.5
** **ok ill be honest here im even angry at myself for being so lazy but on my honor i will try to make a comeback at least this year, if not i will punch myself... again, but whatever flames will be used for my fireplace and the criticism will be acknowledged
Fur one and fur all! (Part 1)
Remember, i'm open to criticism, and i'll change the story thumbnail later. i yawn, exasperated. stupidly, i left my project until the last minute, so i sit here, at four in the morning, with numerous pizza crusts and empty energy drinks next to me.