Marshall's Love Adventure
It's my first time writing something major like this, so any constructive criticism is appreciated. anyway, stick around because this story will take a while. :) part 2 coming out soon. disclaimer: i do not own paw patrol and this is simply for fun.
Black Velvet (Prologue of an unfinished story)
All criticizes, whether constructive or not, will help. prologue she regained her consciousness, but not her memory of where she was or why she was here. the world came to her focus, the fox finally saw the blood on her hand.
A New Look
As always, constructive criticism and feedback in general is highly appreciated.
Jaime's babyfur journal
An: consructive criticism is apreciated and nice comments are ok but mean one not accepted. if i see one mean comment i will remove this story i dont write for you i write for myself and i dont need to post these online.
Life by the Page 1
If leon was anything more than a novelist he was his own best critic. he always felt as though he didn't socialize enough, as though he was a recluse that only cared about his work. this wasn't entirely true of course but these thoughts did hold merit.
Story Concept 1 (ASU)
^^ lemme know how i did, criticism and all. depending on how much feedback i get, i'll continue playing with this concept
You promised.... (Teaser)
Outside of his stupor, paramedics were lifting the critically injured wolf onto a stretcher. police and firefighers were desperately working on the other twisted pile of metal that had been, until a few minutes prior- a car.
Team Smartz Ch.1 - Lucky Penny
Comments & critiques are appreciated (i want real, constructive criticism dammit!)
Road Crew - Ch. 1 - Here and now
Comments, suggestions, pointing out errors, criticism and anything in between is very welcome. i might be a decent proofreader, but probably failed with my own writing. anyway, here we go!
The Stranger in the Winds
Constructive criticism is welcome.)
Ryan's Life
This is my first story so feel free to give me some criticism haha. well i do believe i will continue this story as soon as i get the time. a very sleep deprived drake named ryan woke up sometime in the afternoon.
Second Chance
(( comic project i am working on, basically i'm looking for advice/constructive criticism on the pacing, is this interesting? does it grab your attention? and any advice better writers might be able to give me.