Writing Tips vol. 4
Painting a poetic picture is great, but if your writing gets too flowery and detailed, it will detract from the story. chances are, not knowing the exact hue of somebody's shoelaces won't hurt your story.
Commision for Ignoto
There were flower petals layered out along the couch and floor, spreading a flowery scent. steven led michael to the couch, and laid down with the bunny on top of him. michael started gently kissing the owl under him.
The Hyena’s Concubine
Marie slide a pair of matching stockings up simba's arms, then she fastened a flowery garter around his thigh. "beautiful.", marie said as she looked over the former king's son, handing him a bouquet.
Chapter 2- A Lover’s Embrace
She eventually finds her best formal dress and throws it on, alongside some flowery perfume before taking time to notice that, in the time it had taken her to dress, crystalia had dressed herself as well, having put on a beautiful, floral patterned dress with
The Club
Her smell lingered, flowery and beautiful. alex just sat there, parked with the engine growling, mulling the night's events over and over again in his head. he turned on the radio, windows down and elbow hanging out the window lazily.
The Elysian School of Recreational Podiatry
They had the same faint scent as the rest of her fur: clean, flowery, and maternal. i envied the kids. the door creaked open and another customer came in. my luck held.
Fluffy Fangs - Chapter 2
Lavender held it up to herself, blinking and then scowling at the flowery design in the center, glaring down at the vanilla. “really?" “mhm!" he chirped back, sticking his tongue out at her.
A Puddle of Mud's More Trouble than It's Worth
The flowery aroma of the bubble bath had soaked into his fur, much to the fox's dismay. the roo lifted him out of the bath and swaddled him in an enormous white towel, cradling him in her arms as she carried him out of the bathroom and across the hall.
Halo: FUBAR Chapter 07 - Objects in mirror
_ [as the _jackass_ theme song plays, sergeant seth sawyer proceeds to run across a flowery meadow, stark-bollock naked, lathered in honey while a group of covenant drones crudely spray-painted with yellow and black stripes chase after him.]
{Babyfur} Making Up For Lost Time (2/2)
In response to the sunlight, his flowery ears and tail perk up and his eyes flutter upon.
How to Act Like a Dragon (A Wings of Fire Fanfic) Chapter 5
He then wave his hand and the next thing i knew, the scenery changed from a flowery field to a floating palace high in the sky. "woah..." no words can describe how beautiful this place in front of me is.
A trainer's story [23]
Charizard blinked when he realize the thing around his foot was thorn whip sticking out from one of roserade's flowery hand.