Wolves' Legacy 2: Chapter 8
Anyway, as always, critiques and comments are welcome. (edit) now, the whole wall of text is no longer a messed-up wall of text. i have edited it so it is easier to read. i am so sorry that i changed it far too late.
Gnoll Brigand: Prologue II
As with the previous entry, votes, suggestions, and critique go in the comments on here. discussion, ideas not present in the multiple choice sections, and character ideas for our adventurer are encouraged!
Raised by the Machine - A Memoir (Chapter One)
critique is plenty appreciated. thank you! 1 my mother tells me that when i was a baby, my parents had to sometimes check to make sure i was still alive.
The Stone- Chapter 2
:d please, do not be shy aboiut critiqueing or commenting!
Skyrim Dragonhearth
I hope you enjoy the story and i would appreciate any critique you can offer. ** skyrim dragonhearth part 1** my father has been unreasonable all month.
Luca's Story Ch. 10
I want critiques of the story, not my views._ chapter x--the kicker _close my eyes when i go to bed and i dream of angels who make me smile i feel better when i hear them say everything will be wonderful someday_ _promises mean everything
Part One: Cold Shoulders, but a Warm Smile
I'm trying to put a lot of work into this story and want it to be something good so any critiques and such that i can get will be most helpful. as to the story, zeke is who i am in sorts.
An Assassin's Tale Chapter 1: A Return Home
As always, any critiques and comments are appreciated. ^.=.^ cover art is copyright to misora on furaffinity. all characters and story is copyright to me. do not use without permission. "i already told you, i'm not taking any more jobs.
Soul Searching
I look forward to seeing everyone's reactions, however, please try to keep critique strictly constructive. rate fairly, i hope everyone enjoys themselves and, most importantly... have an amazing day.
"The Thin Line," Part M
"yes, some bright fur has figured if they got some a.d.c. to update the map, it'll keep furs from popping in and out of the statecraft chamber, asking what's going on and making comments and borrowing leaves and critiquing
The legend of Tigersight Chapter 7
#8 of the legend of tigersight i welcome any critique or suggestions or comments, as these are incentive for me to write more. be it character, story or grammar based, feel free to comment or send me a note/email.
Love's Battlefield - Volume 13
Smirked the rabbit as he set down his mop and critiqued their work. "well, i'd say we did more that we set out to do, wouldn't you guys? i'm about ready to clock out and bit this place adieu, so, care for that car ride now?"