Fantasy Story Outline
- combat attitude - calm and collective - fiery and aggressive - wants to know what he is going to face - quin shun warns him against it - worries about his friends, anea and paul - lectures colby on readiness and what to expect, etc
The Struggle Within
Criticism,praise,etc. hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the eevee shivered in his sleep.not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago.
Chapter IV - Fights and Battles Have Begun
Constructive criticism, creative ideas, things you would have done differently, etc. i love hearing what my readers are thinking. i may primarily write for myself but i do get a lot of satisfaction knowing other people are getting involved in my stories!
Silver and Gold – Fight – ch 2
"as you're new jayson let's say best 2 out of 3" the coach said as he gave us the rules, no head/groin shots, etc. we got to our side and waited for the coach to call to start.
Daggers of Darkness, Book #5: "The First Ones" - Prologue
However, i will try to keep the typos, etc., to a minimum. the main things i would like from those reading this are comments, questions, and suggestions. i only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite.
Land of Discord Prologue: A Bizarre Adventure
The group soon became exhausted and were surrounded by a horde of mutants, monsters, abominations, etc. even argeloth started to feel exhausted and was struggling to keep the spiritual magic that bind his body together.
PokeMEN World: Manual
Pokemon facilities and treatment:- since they are more humanoid now and more understanding of human technologies, laws, etc, many human-only facilities have now opened to pokemon as well, but there are also the pokemon exclusive ones that changed their services
Shadow of Everfree Forest - Chapter 1, Draft 1
This is posted up solely to receive criticism, suggestions, etc etc, so don't be afraid to leave some in your comments :) the everfree forest was dark, and quiet as usual.
A Fur's Jest - 1
etc etc and all that jazz my mind was spinning as though i was waking up from a coma. static radiating from a radio perked my ears as i heard, "mr. hare, have you retrieved it?" it was a shrill, almost ancient, voice.
Courtship, Part 1
And if you feel like it, leave a comment below to tell me if you liked it, if you hated it, if you think i'm full of bullshit, etc. criticism, praise, and discussion are what keep me motivated to write. even trolls.
An Alternate Fursona (Character Sheet)
- food: pizza, chicken, fries, burgers, etc. - literature: the catcher in the rye, fahrenheit 451, the aeneid, the odyssey, and a tale of two cities. - drinks: soda, green tea, orange juice, and lemonade.
The King's Company: Chapter One: Our Journey Begins!
Mxm, mxmxm, etc.) anyways, hope yall enjoy ch. 1!