Fantasy Story Outline
- combat attitude - calm and collective - fiery and aggressive - wants to know what he is going to face - quin shun warns him against it - worries about his friends, anea and paul - lectures colby on readiness and what to expect, etc
Samhain Host
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What Love Means
That's just how life is, deal with it, etc. etc. he sighed. 'ya.... what a world...' it wasn't long before he looked at his watch, stood, and wandered back the way he'd come. his head hung low, he didn't notice the bushes behind his bench.
Courtship, Part 1
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A Fur's Jest - 1
etc etc and all that jazz my mind was spinning as though i was waking up from a coma. static radiating from a radio perked my ears as i heard, "mr. hare, have you retrieved it?" it was a shrill, almost ancient, voice.
Shadow of Everfree Forest - Chapter 1, Draft 1
This is posted up solely to receive criticism, suggestions, etc etc, so don't be afraid to leave some in your comments :) the everfree forest was dark, and quiet as usual.
Land of Discord Prologue: A Bizarre Adventure
The group soon became exhausted and were surrounded by a horde of mutants, monsters, abominations, etc. even argeloth started to feel exhausted and was struggling to keep the spiritual magic that bind his body together.
PokeMEN World: Manual
Pokemon facilities and treatment:- since they are more humanoid now and more understanding of human technologies, laws, etc, many human-only facilities have now opened to pokemon as well, but there are also the pokemon exclusive ones that changed their services
Daggers of Darkness, Book #5: "The First Ones" - Prologue
However, i will try to keep the typos, etc., to a minimum. the main things i would like from those reading this are comments, questions, and suggestions. i only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite.
The Struggle Within
Criticism,praise,etc. hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the eevee shivered in his sleep.not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago.
Michael and Amanda, Chapter 5
"what about rodents, lagomorphs, ursines, etc.?" "i don't dislike them; they just don't appeal to me." "would you accept one as a friend?" "most definitely.
A Place for the Stranger
He's ... okay, cliché time, he's the best thing that ever happened to me, etc., etc." the tiger chuckled and patted the lion on the shoulder. "i know you won't.