(( Comic project I am working on, basically I'm looking for advice/constructive criticism on the pacing, is this interesting? Does it grab your attention? And any advice better writers might be able to give me. Sorry to have it broken up like this, but...
Nudity, ice age, scientist
"That's it, keep her tethered!"
The voice was merciless and sadistic, speaking words she couldn't understand. She growled and yanked her head back and forth, sending one of the two legged flesh creatures flying. Her reward was a spear in the neck. She...
Gore, No-Yiff, Story, Synx, Synxirazu, ice age
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**blue sky studios owns ice age and their characters.**
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good ol' possum fun
it was a sunny day in the valley; the herd was taking their leisurely time after their underground adventure.
Brothers, Extreme, Opossum, Possum, crash, eddie, fun, ice age
Ch. 1 : Rite of Passage
Pacific Northwest North America. Late Pleistocene epoch. 23,710 B.C.
A herd of Mammoths are grazing in a meadow on a warm noon. In the nearby pines, five Dire wolves are hiding and watching patiently in prone with their spears...
Anthro, Dire wolves, Inuit, Mammals, Native American, Primitive, Wolf, hunters, ice age, tribe
The ice age characters are owned by blue sky studios.
Ellie, Hurt/Comfort, Mammoth, Possum, Romance, Sabretooth Tiger, Smilodon, crash, diego, eddie, flashback, ice age, manny, peaches, sid, sloth
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**please note: i don't own any ice age characters, they are owned by blue sky studios.**
chapter 1: love troubles and hot springs
it was a nice sunny day afternoon; sid was just sitting quietly by the pond minding his own business.
Ellie, Hot Springs, Hurt/Comfort, Mammoth, Possum, Romance, Sabretooth Tiger, Smilodon, crash, diego, eddie, ice age, manny, peaches, sid, sloth
Everyone is sleeping...except for Diego. Manny, Peaches, Crash and Eddie, and Sid were fast asleep. Sid was rather distant from the group, sleeping near a tree. Sid's furry smelly butt was facing Diego's direction. Diego can't take it anymore. Diego...
Facesitting, Gay
Buck was ready to go to sleep. He was tucked away in his tree and out for the night. As he finally closed his eyes and fell asleep, Buck felt as if he awoke again. But this strange new world Buck awoke in, seemed incredibly stange. Buck was in New York...
Beaver, Facesitting, Fart, Forced, Weasel
Due to the attacks of humanimals on humans coupled with the new ice age, in just 20 years, human civilization crumbled and fell."
"an ice age? wow! so, when did it end?"
"the ice age started slowly ending approximately 8,000 years ago."
Abigail Matthews, Amanda Fuchs, Anne Panthera, Bertha Karhu, Edward Blaidd, Galina Sobaka, History lessons, Humanimal slavery, Michael Thomson, Michelle Tierboskat, Mrs. Khomyak, Ophelia Fuchs, Revelations, The Dark Times, Wanda Anaguma, ice age
**warming up the ice by sindragon**
i dont own any of the ice age chateras
but do own stuart,alex,shadow,nala and other later on
main pairings: diego xoc ocxoc
store will have animals/human parings so don't like don't read it
set after ice age 3
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Sabretooth Tiger
Not many lived there, none that you would call human. 250 years prior to the modern ice age, there were a few who believed the ice age was inevitable... and a couple of them contacted genetic engineering.
Feral, Wolf