The rise of a normal man. Chapter 1- Breaking into dawn
Comments and critiques are appreciated! there won't be any hot stuff in the first couple of chapters, but it will show up eventually ;) i promise.
Macaroni, King of Mudpie
The poodle mentally critiques each dog, actually, he does it out loud, and a doberman tries to poop in his mouth, but he doesn't have it in him, and besides, macaroni needs to discuss plans of taking over the world.
The Dragon and the Apple Trees
I am by no means a great story teller, so feel free to critique. (yes i know it's short) there was once a child, a young dragon, growing up in the world as it is today.
Rays of Hope
**well this is my first chapter i want to everybody to read and review and i love straight foward and honest critiques is to improve my writing skills as i say again if you want my oc please pm me and i would love to hear your ideas about rodrigo and give
That Day
Note from the writer- this is my first story, so feel free to critique it. i accept you're feedback. april 7, 2008- 5:00 am "riiiiiing riiiiiing!" the alarm clock sprang into life, singing the song of its people.
Not So Retired Any More II
#2 of not so retired any more okay here comes chapter 2 critique is very welcome. also: adult story! ye be warned! dead furs tell no tales (except in csi: furry)!
Breakroom Treats
critique welcome! cast: bodbloat as steve "bod" bodbloat: the owner of pumpz magazine. a lava drake. vrghr as vrghr "vrghr" vrghr: the head of the cooking and food section.
DreamLand Part 2
Anyway please leave comments critiquing my work, want to know the reaction from anyone reading this and if they find it interesting enough at the moment and if i should hurry the story up a bit or if this is a good pace im going at.
The Lead Crown: Ch 9.1a, Accountability
Comments, questions, quandaries, critiques, and input is always appreciated. thanks for reading! tranquil waters: the lead crown ch 9.1, accountability the princess' travel carriage was a grand affair.
Hedgehog Infinitum
First thing ever written on my own volition, so i would love to hear any and all comments, critiques or questions. i had fun writing it, too.
Tomboy Fantasy Part-1
Please, i more than encourage critiques. i'm doing this for the sole reason that it is so far fun, and because it seems a good way to grow as an artist and convey ideas. your feedback will be gratefully appreciated, more than you can imagine.
Prison Cell (Thursday Prompt 23/8/12)
* * * comments, suggestions, and critiques are all welcome and appreciated. thanks for reading!