Path of the Lion (Prologue)
The lion as i mentioned in the last upload, i've had my reservations about uploading this anywhere because the kingdoms enjoined trilogy is something that i really intend to be my magnum opus, but i finally decided that uploading it here and getting some critique
Not So Retired Any More II
#2 of not so retired any more okay here comes chapter 2 critique is very welcome. also: adult story! ye be warned! dead furs tell no tales (except in csi: furry)!
Ze'Tazz - Conception
In any case, it's the first bit (literally, his hatching.) and i hope to get some good critique and responses. enjoy. ^_^ the story of ze'tazz conception - "i see the tip! keep pushing captain!" cried the doctor.
A Wolf's first love Part 5: First date
As always comment, and critiques are appreciated and hopefully are making the story better._ "no you are doing this.
Chapter Two: It's Not What You Know
"well, it was one way to get him to stop the stirring critique," ryan mentioned. "i saw ms. faulkner glance at malcolm from time to time. i'm sure she would have said something eventually."
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 11 -- Eternity Begins Today
I'll get chapter 12 up very soon, but in the meantime, leave comments/critiques! i might put up a revised version of this, who knows...
Tony da Lion: ~Love again~
:p critique is much appreciated. let me know if you see something i can improve upon. if you have any suggestions as to what direction the story takes, feel free to share. who knows, if i like it enough, i might put it in and give you credit.
Wasteland Survivor – A Voice From Heaven - ch5
#6 of wasteland survivor back again, please go easy on critique on this one, for the few hours it took to bash it out i was pretty high on prescription painkillers, if its too terrible will pull it down (once i am down) and fix it.
A Long Way From Home - Darkmoor pt 1
Comments and critiques always welcome, and feel free check out the original f.a post over here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/22671922/ it was with rattle and moan that the barred caravan traversed the lonely dunes of darkmoor; adrift within an ocean of
Percy's Life Part 1 - The Mighty Caterpillar
As always, critique and comments of all sorts are greatly appreciated!
A troll after my own heart
If you would like to join us in our literary exploits, here's the link https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg critiques and comments are appreciated. a dim light. that was all i had in these abandoned hallways.
Dog Cracking
So give him a +watch if you can cause he's a great person :d i would also like to thank ticklishfurry (or fa: ticklishfurry ), he's been a great friend and really supportive :) hope you enjoy and please comment all you want, i love constructive critique :