2020 A.D. Part 1 [unfinished]
#11 of alte geschichte/old story fiction© shane translate and correction © arkoninu thumbnail © jugg4 i would be really happy to get feedback, but please keep in mind this is not the end version of this story.
GoodDays-old grolithe new tricks
Disclamer:i don't own pokemon,if i did there would be 20 new kinds i promise this is the longest ill make and review it i need feedback. i feed you entertainment you feed me improvements this*is the signal for my side notes . .......
Of Skyscrapers and Taxi drivers... Chapter 1: Cats, Snow, and a Doorman
Comments and feedback are always welcome, its what keeps us writers/artists sharp!
Too Safe
I am a beginner writer and feedback or any tips would be nice. note this is purely fiction, no actual events are portrayed in this story. ( jamie reed was a dark brown fox, stationed as a corporal at an army outpost in samarra, iraq.
Brisk's and Noah's Date
Any feedback would be much appreciated! it is a warm sunny evening, a posh restaurant being in clear sight in front of me. looking inside there is a couple eating together; they are just eating their desserts.
The Love of a Riolu
I would like for some feedback on how i did. good and bad. it would really mean alot to me the sky was dark with spots of white stars and the disk of the moon. i just kept staring at it.
Astral High - Prologue
Point being, leave some feedback, enjoy, and get ready for another story! i awoke with a start, as if my alarm clock had gone off. i hit the off button, and looked around the room.
Such a Pig (Pig TF)
Please comment and give feedback "such a pig" (pig tf) isabel was a young girl at the age of 18. her features were petite but still very cute. isabel got wonderful grades and was generally a good person.
Shadowed Confessions
Would really appreciate feedback. trapped in an endless cycle of excuses and answers, waiting for the one day when it will all be over. looking up at the night sky, searching for the one answer i'm really looking for.
The Last Mission.
#1 of stories based on imagination, written by sadness. feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Prologue (Unnamed series)
And feel free to give any helpful feedback. ^^ prologue **15 years ago.** _chaos. chaos everywhere._ _dragons screaming._ _a hive on fire._ _the queen gone._ no one knew what to do. their minds were all awash with abject terror.
Miharra's Battle
I like to write and i want to improve so i'd really appreciate any feedback given.