Bad dog!
Because it prevents her from articulating certain thoughts, her voicebox neatly severs the feedback loop of context that might bring those unapproved connections together in her brain.
The Mute - Chapter 5: Moving Day
As always, feedback and ratings are very much appreciated, and favs are awesome! <3 - moocat (1,293 wds) * * * perspective: kyle * * * time: october 3rd, 13:00 * * * "hey, can you pass me those socks?"
Of Wolf and Man (Part 1)
This is my first story and i wanna know how i did so leave me some feedback.
Parallel Universe: Ch 1
~~ please, comments or feedback. this is actually my first story.
First story: A walk in the woods
#1 of a walk in the woods heres my first story. i dont plan to make a series out of this but i'll all depends on the feedback i get. so feel free to comment and give tips to help me write better.
Chapter 3
Remember to leave feedback! i hope i hear from all of you! bye! "where have you been?" the voice of my father startles me as i walk in the door. his voice is stern but his eyes are friendly.
Commission Terms and Info
I will consider the midpoint draft feedback and editing phase to be closed once you send the second payment.
Astral High - Chapter 11
I still want feedback. you know, to those of you are reading this but aren't saying anything. you know, just a reminder that feedback would be amazing. hear the thu'um of my fellow furs and what not. gods i'm a nerd.
Lizzard men
feedback welcomed. dont go easy on me and tell me whats wrong. from grammar mistakes to story ideas. if you want and will be very nice to me i may add you/your fursona to the story to spice it up a bit ^\_-
In Mother's Shadow (1/9)
** **feedback very much appreciated!**
Chapter 2: The Beginning of a Business Relationship
Please give me some feedback below.
Blaze of Glory Chapter 1
So you need to disable the filter on deviantart so, feedback both negative (okay), and good (better) is requested. and there is a bit of a 'contest' in part four.