The Engineer's Curse
Chief and reg took turns explaining the situation, and how every repair to the system simply caused another error somewhere else. sometimes across systems that were not connected in any obvious way.
Heart of the Lion
I hang my head in silence while my heart demands that i say something to correct their ignorance and error.
Lessons In Happiness - Prelude
If i have any errors here, grammatically or spelling, or just got something wrong with one of the characters, please let me know so i can fix it and improve.
The Fox, The Rat and The Metal Beast
My first attempt at a story, this is an prologue. yeha i know it sucks, go easy on me. i know its shit, theres lotsa spelling errors and its just a draft mostly.
Forked Memories
Never moving from his addiction, to nothing more than graphical error on his life. words of degradation, removing my outer reflection. my mind set, programmed to something he set. he was my snake, to my adam. leading me astray.
A Bookworm's First Love Ch.10
#3 of yuri nothing to say except tell me if i made grammar errors! i quickly looked away. surely i just imagined it? i couldn't be sure. something about those two just seemed...off. i took a quick look around.
exadmini part 1
Reply 23:59 today- (exadmini) error!!!!!! why do you keep trying to hurt me? please stop looking for me.
The Life of Another Reference Guide - Talent
Most deviants are forced to learn by little more than trial and error unless they are lucky enough to have contact with an experienced deviant to help them. even then practice can be a dangerous proposition depending on the talent involved.
The Life of Another - Reference Guide - Talent
Most deviants are forced to learn by little more than trial and error unless they are lucky enough to have contact with an experienced deviant to help them. even then practice can be a dangerous proposition depending on the talent involved.
Road Crew - Ch. 1 - Here and now
Comments, suggestions, pointing out errors, criticism and anything in between is very welcome. i might be a decent proofreader, but probably failed with my own writing. anyway, here we go!
A Bronze Rising: Kidnapping
I was a little high coming in sacrificing concealment for a better margin of error. the human unfortunately was turned in my direction as the trees gave way instantly to plowed earth under me and it began to run.
1:14 Conference #1
"but that is where they make their errors. the underground of one city, just one mind you, can generate more profit in one quarter than the lazarus institute makes in a year. one city, like palamont."