A Failed Duty - Chapter 6
Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.
Vast, Our World and Our Resolve - Chapter Ten
For a handful of beats of the man’s racing heart, the rushing of wind through the trees and the buzzing of insects provided the only commentary to the pair’s declaration. one of the elders cut through the relative stillness.
The Moonhound Chapter One
Sarah kept up her commentary, dropping names alan struggled to impress into his memory, and recounting the misfortunes of the families associated with each house.
Black Dwarf
Flipping through the notes and carefully comparing the two he kept a steady commentary going, most of it went over my head. he kept going on about some sort of influence that the black dwarf might have on certain types of people.
The Autumn Wood, When two spirits meet
As i cooked lunch and cleaned up, all the time enduring the running commentary on my short comings that my father took delight in reciting to my brothers, i thought about the dream i had been having. the dream i had had the night before had come again.
A New Dawn - Chapter 2 (Home Coming)
I watched him leave before turning back to the table, jason and michael took a seat on the far side of the table next to callidus, michael making sure to sit between them to try and stop any unfortunate events that may take place due to jason's 'commentary
Lunch at King's
commentary is highly appreciated. either pm or comment below, if it'd please you. the town of partridge drums is based off of my own hometown, and most locations may seem unfamiliar to most.
Family Therapy: Celestine Hentzel (and Rociel Hentzel)
_Every year since Rociel and Celestine were ten years of age, her father has scheduled a week of the year dedicated to visiting a family therapist to help learn of any problems within the family to allow Rhyne to address them properly as well as have...
Embers of Dawn: Chapter 4: Aftermath
“no one asked for your commentary, lisa!” lyra squawked, sticking out her tongue. “i’d have landed just fine if you hadn’t made me laugh.” pyretalon scoffed, flicking his tail. “dance moves? in the middle of a workday?
Goddess of the Sea Chapter 2
I can't write a better story if i don't get comments and commentary.
Nine Lives - Ep2
He pulled a cloth from his pocket and wiped off his muzzle before he opened his eyes and spoke, the small digital recorder in his top pocket catching his quiet commentary.
Vore Night at The Painted Wolf
Gemini meanwhile sprang back to the microphone, the podium raising into the air to help him get a better view as he began his commentary. "don't worry folks, as we promised, the lioness is fully sapient and dressed in our special suit!"