Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed
He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...
We Really Do Care, Zorori
It was a sunny day in a nearby forest as a young male fox and two male boars were walking around and felt a need to use the bathroom. "Anyone need to use the bathroom?' asked the male fox curiously. "How about it, Ishishi and...
FotR Behind the Scenes 1
Production Number: Title: Published Year P1 Flight of the Raptor 2010 P2 One Last Shadow 2010 P3 The Nebulous Imperative 2010 P4 Surprises 2010 P5 Pieces 2010 P6 Puzzle 2010 P7 Picture 2010 P8 The Derelict 2010 P9 Paradigm Shift 2010 P10...
Bonus Material: Deleted Scenes
The rewrite of this scene "accidently" gave me a way that she could travel with farnsbeck and you can see that her character changed slightly.
The Hunter
The hunter sits at the bar, sipping from his mug of ale, dressed in dark, worn leathers, hair wet and hanging loosely. All around him the townsfolk laugh and chatter in the warm light as they nurse their own drinks and meals. The hunter's eyes glint...
Keep it Up
"Good, keep it up." _Shut up._ Kevin was tired of hearing that passive-aggressive bullshit, the manager's way of saying 'you used to suck, now you don't suck, keep not sucking.' Never mind he already worked the press faster than suggested for...
Court Date
"Don't you think they were too kind?" "Kind?" Bertrand replied incredulously. "You call banishment 'kind'?" "For the crime? Yes." Answered Jerica plainly as they strolled the great hall of the courts, all around them noblemen, soldiers and...
Burn
"Go away." "No." What a pain in the ass. I hoped vainly that I'd never see him again, but of course I knew otherwise. I'd only be rid of him when he was dead and buried, and even then... "_Go away_." "Not doing." Good lord, man, I will hurt you....
Any Day Now
"No..." Breathed Blondie as he knelt by his companion's side, looking down at the man who was all too still. "No, no no, don't do this!" Blistered hands reached out to slap weakly at dying man's face, framed by that raven hair that had grown tangled...
What We Always Dreamed Of
A single scene of intrigue, that's all. "you're late." "i know." i replied plainly, seating myself across from him at the little, steel-wire table.
The Sapphire guardian
Silence enveloped the tavern as the heavily cloaked and hooded stranger pushed open the door and walked in. He was about average height, with tanned skin and a good build. The tell-tale hard edged lines of fine leather armour could be seen through his...
039 - Proxime Pt.07
They left the Huntsman mouthing something to himself, as he sat slouched against the wall staring into the nothing that he now resides. Ideas' managed to push through the scuffle with Butters, Sawyer and Tyard riding on their back (Butters and Tyard...