We Really Do Care, Zorori
It was a sunny day in a nearby forest as a young male fox and two male boars were walking around and felt a need to use the bathroom. "Anyone need to use the bathroom?' asked the male fox curiously. "How about it, Ishishi and...
Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed
He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...
Alexander's Accounts - Part 1
I never liked fight scenes. i always preferred dialogue and hearing how interpersonal relationships were changing, about the other characters.
The Family He Never Had Part 1
Warning, there will be mature scenes later on in the story as it goes on. it was a sunny day somewhere in africa and tarzan was scoping out the jungle area where the gorillas lived as he was checking to see if there were any enemies around.
A sample scene
'Closer...almost there...just a few more steps to go.' Feint refractions signal their way up a tall lace of smoke lulling in the sunlit gloom. Through a crack in the canopy, a single hungry tongue holds its breath, licking in anticipation. Though no...
Godson
This chapter is mainly scene setting and i hope will give a taste of my writing style etc
Crime Scene
The scene was plenty grisly enough that i didn't need the coroner to tell me the cause of death.
FotR Behind the Scenes 1
Production Number: Title: Published Year P1 Flight of the Raptor 2010 P2 One Last Shadow 2010 P3 The Nebulous Imperative 2010 P4 Surprises 2010 P5 Pieces 2010 P6 Puzzle 2010 P7 Picture 2010 P8 The Derelict 2010 P9 Paradigm Shift 2010 P10...
Jamie Character Sketch
Another week; another match. The Anglo-Nubian finished slipping his wrist bands on when his coordinator stopped by the men's locker room to give him the five-minute cue. He took this time to limber up before the match. While doing some quick stretches,...
Bonus Material: Deleted Scenes
The rewrite of this scene "accidently" gave me a way that she could travel with farnsbeck and you can see that her character changed slightly.
As One-Ch.4: Hero
_in... out... in... out... in... out..._ ruby looked over at ren and saw that he was watching the entire scene with a kind of sadness in his eyes- a longing.
The Last Human Part 9
Webra Walters knew this was a one day that went from good to bad, she informed Scrooge that she'll interview Raito as soon as he's feeling better. Raito ran for the mansion and he sat down near the pool outside. He managed to stop crying but he was...