Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed

He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...

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The Sapphire guardian

Silence enveloped the tavern as the heavily cloaked and hooded stranger pushed open the door and walked in. He was about average height, with tanned skin and a good build. The tell-tale hard edged lines of fine leather armour could be seen through his...

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039 - Proxime Pt.07

They left the Huntsman mouthing something to himself, as he sat slouched against the wall staring into the nothing that he now resides. Ideas' managed to push through the scuffle with Butters, Sawyer and Tyard riding on their back (Butters and Tyard...

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037 - Proxime Pt.05

In the chaos of swings being thrown and bodies being lobbed across the table, Butters tried their best to keep their grip on Tyard as not to get separated. The act of exiting this rumble was surprisingly difficult, perhaps only 2 or 3 seconds had...

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Life of Honor

? A Life of Honor For ArrowQuivershaft By Draconicon Kawheek stood between the approaching horde and the portal back to Hashinshira, his spear in hand and his wings unfurled to get their attention. The avian monk planted the butt of his...

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Where There's Smoke...

Author's Notes: This story is NON-CANON from Journey of a Bastard Son, and it's also completely clean. No sex, not even nudity. I still hope you guys enjoy. ----------------------------------------------------------------- Windthor Pryas always tried...

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Battle Bot

The bat had pretty much laughed in his face. "Are you sure you're supposed to be here?" With the crowd already cheering for them from around the ring as they sized each other up after the bell had just rang, it seemed a little late to the skunk for...

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Lucky!!! - Chapter 04

The Red Panda closes the notepad she had written this entire saga on, I mean it's her tragedy, but even she's self-aware that it's a well good story like. Maybe she'll get to publish it one day, dunno. She reclines on her computer seat as she glances...

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Join The Dance

The room that Klein walked into was bare and white, like an empty vessel. There were two life-sized mannequins resting at its center, laying half on top of each other in a heap with strings folding down around them. As he approached them, the strings...

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Oasis

'_It's a good thing that I've already read this before_,' she groaned inwardly as the shaking bus rudely closed the book she was re-reading in her hands yet again, _'Or there's no way I'd be able to keep up with it otherwise.'_ The cephalopod had...

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Showtime

"Now you're going to see a real fight," Rakim told Klein on their way to their seats as they saw the next contestants on their way to take their place in the ring. But what did a real fight look like? The otter climbed up on the rope, using it like a...

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Before A Fall

Things weren't going so bad for Soma - it wasn't even a tournament month. He'd been getting a few patients he'd needed to take care of here and there, but just the right amount, not so much that it was proving overwhelming for him to keep up. It's...

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