Book of Particles: Silver Stream Memory 4 and 2
Cardia interjected. "oh my god," sko said shaking his head for side to side. "c'mon," my writing counterpart seethingly emitted putting a hand to his forehead and leaning forward on it disappointed. "you're going to do it.
Gilded Cage: Chapter 30
"leon--" olas attempted to interject, his voice soft and cautious. "these two gryphon companions of mine, they're planning a special excursion to whitedell.
Ardring - Chapter 3
Zerrif's mother interjected. she was a creamy colour, but somewhere in her family line had been golden brown. that's where zerrif got that from.
City of Light: Chapter 51
Reginald interjected with an indignant squawk, “the master’s business is his own. any stories about his _vigorous_, fiery lovemaking will have to be left to gossip.” "oh, but reginald."
Feyrahl, FA Ch 1.3
Cecil interjected. "the emperor is thankful for me!" silas nodded his head to the ferret.
Electroluxe!, Chapter Two.
Vance interjects. \>tommy squints at the shorter man next to him. \>"what are you implying?" \>"nothing, nothing." he reassures with a smug grin. \>"right.
Electroluxe!, Chapter Eight.
Vance interjected. “if it weren't for this plastic crap we wouldn't be having these problems anyway.
Loveless Incantation: Chapter 14
Lacey interjects. initiating a slow rhythm, i guide her in a dance. gradually, she loosens up, if only to prevent herself from stumbling over her stiff legs.
Writing Tips vol. 4
One thing i see a lot of is accidental omniscience; random interjections with thoughts of characters other than the current pov character.
Altruistic Intent - CH. 10
"yes, ma'am," he quietly interjects. "y-yes, ma'am," lisa repeats, her eyes meeting his before turning back down to her new bowl of soup.
Stranger than Fiction
In unison they began to thank the woman when she interjected: "but if you two are disrespectful to me or my property you will be out of this apartment faster than my voice translator can translate lithuanian."
The Legend of Spyro: Path of Delusions Book I Chapter 16
" " is" sparx interjected "...is brill so important?"