Practice, Practice, Practice (Otherwise Untitled)
#104 of short stories an otter improves in his ability to perform a task. though the weight of being a pallbearer had become familiar to the otter's hands, his heart carried each burden as though it were his first.
Entering The Night
Tissue grows and thickens as you embrace the lycanthropy coursing through your veins, just begging the miraculous fluid to complete your improvement.
Reincarnated as an Orc in a Fantasy Land Ch. 3
Others in the tribe had naturally improved as well, and their small village was becoming a small town now.
Wallace in the snow
Tragedy was mount fuji is in honshu island and wallace knows that since he always hiked it all started at age 0 when he was born at age 14 when he started to become manly he hiked to improve his growing desire for adventure his height is 5"10
The Evermor Prophecies - What did you think?
It helps me improve my writing. oh yeah, and this will be an interactive story, in which you, the viewers will be able to suggest what happens next after chapter 1, which is awesome for you and me. hope you enjoyed the prologue!
Absolution
Designed, built, and walked into prison everyday for 5 years i didn't learn my lesson i was sentenced to hard time for 28 months this was my punishment this was my absolution i served my time i was educated about my crime this punishment improved
sofurry so far
Though i have had no bumps into any problems the only one i can complain about is where you click on someones art but you can't go older or newer art witch would be nice but its not a need for this sites improvements.
That Burning Sensation
#2 of burn hello and if you are reading this thank you very much^-^ well my first chapter so far has only one rating and it isn't going to attract much attention so the rating may not improve very soon \>,\< well anyways after i post this chapter
LoS Into The Shadows Ch7
Even at your strongest, you stand no chance against this... improved model of mutant," crimson whispered back. "what about you!?" "it's still too strong." "quite!" the head mutant shouted before it kicked spyro in the gut.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
'show don't tell' refers to a method of writing often given to beginners to improve their writing. 'telling' is the act of quite simply saying something in the story happens - for example, driving home.
How does everyone feel about my stories?
Is there anything in particular anyone feels i need to improve on? is there anything that you rather enjoy about my work in particular? i guess i just want some feedback.
The Daemon
Any idea or criticism on how to improve it would be appreciated.