Second Draft of First Story

Edited version of my first draft (things with weird names are in latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer) it's not pleasant being struck with lightning. neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight.

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Jeremy 045; To Save The Day

I'm way ahead in writing out the first draft but there may be more cameos in the future.

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Carrier Wolves - Chapter 5: Arms

She had once attempted at writing a piece to justify the independence alliance's position to declare war, but when she looked back at her first draft, she knew that there was no way she could do so. not when she knew.

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Galactic Conflict - Chapter Ten

#74 of legacy of the veiled stars maybe i am rushing this now that i am revealing the answers to mysteries that have been throughout the entire story series but i am a bit eager to finish the first draft of this series so i can start editing it.

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Amber Silverblood: Silverpack, a Sneak Peek!

Remember, this is still taken from the first draft so some things are liable to change during editing. and don't forget to let me know what you think! **chapter one** the forest whispered to me, and i howled in reply.

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Dragon's Gift - Chapter 6 (WIP)

This is a sketch/first draft of the story and so is very weak in structure right now.

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Wolfen - Chapter 21

I don't remember if i have said this before on this site, but these stories that i am posting is essentially a first draft.

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Jeremy 012; Today's Forgotten Hero

Its mostly in first draft form for me but i don't find myself changing too much as i edit, unless i come up with an idea in the mean time.

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Jeremy 028; Slippery People

first draft is now written out to seventy five chapters, and over two hundred thousand words. i'm now at a point where i'm pulling a good deal of stuff from the first run that never saw the light of day. that's whats helping speed things along right now.

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Werewolf Tale II - Chapter 29 - ...And A New Approach

Of course, this being the first draft, there's still more work to do. i can't wait to add this to the ranks of the published novel alongside werewolf tale. until then, enjoy and thank you for reading.

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Oblivion Chapter 1

Basically this is a first draft of mine. well when i say first, i really mean fourth. i was never pleased with the refinement that took place and so i kept on redoing it over and over. anyways enjoy the first installment of oblivion.

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Raised by the Machine - A Memoir (Chapter One)

However, i'm a big baby and feel uncomfortable with sharing a written work of fiction with the world when it's only in its first draft (although the concept of writing a complete draft in a single month is a fantastic feat to embark on).

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