08 - A Brief Rest
The first draft of the complete story is done at 15000 words and i'll post it later tonight on patreon where i'll work on the first major edit. it'll probably be complete by the time i post the last chapter here and update all previous chapters.
Dragon's Gift - Chapter 6 (WIP)
This is a sketch/first draft of the story and so is very weak in structure right now.
Scratch Post 1 - Inner Editor
Note that this works best for first drafts - i would not recommend revising using this technique. 2. ditch the tech. our typical word processors - docs, office, whatever you like writing with - are great for the final copy.
//still-life// (wip)
Much pressure under air so heavy every breath's an exertion move do my little routines passing time move through life and pretend i still have places to be _(god)_ please put me back in the box gently when you're done playing with me first draft
Dracius: Origins Part IV
At any rate, as such these are more raw than the ryan story, so to speak, though most of the ryan stuff is also very much first draft. i don't have this plotted out, so it may double back, contradict, and otherwise not be consistent with itself.
Wasteful Death, CH 09
This is the first draft version of the story.
Some world building thoughts and ideas
Along the way she meets several people, including a potential love interest (a blue ant who goes by the name aragon) this is my first draft of ideas here so there will likely be lots of changes made to this so far inspired by avatar (the last airbender
Rainfall - Chapter 01
.: this is my first draft, any suggestions, insights, and critiques would be very much appreciated.
The Anger Poem
But nevertheless, enjoy my first draft of the anger poem. ohhhh so angry. your comments and likes are most valuable! :) thank you! p.s: yes, poetry slam in our school next friday. but i have stage fright! oh, volcanoes.
The Beaten Path
There...heres the improved version, i decided that the first draft which i wrote ages ago wasn't good enugh, so i've started to rewrite the whole thing.
The Missing Son, Chapter 40
This is a first draft of what is the first orr family chronicles novel on the schedule for publication (no dates yet, probably a few years away) it is the first book planned in a trilogy.
The Odd Couple
A first draft of my new story. it's a different version of the story that lunatic phantasm started for me. it's actually kinda close to how my mate and i really met and whatnot.