Pokémon: New World (Chapter Two: Meeting the Gang)
Also, my first pokémon battle scene... who'd i do? defintely not something i'm used to, rather be the one doing the fighting but...
David's Start of a New Adventure (Ch.38 - An Evolutionary Battle Pt.2)
At the battle scene before me i saw myself, looking bruised while having cuts and scrapes all over my body; having my mate, latios, beating the hell out of me.
RJ's Adventure - Chapter 2: Preparation
Next chapter we get to meet rj's rival, as well as my first attempt at a battle scene. i'll see how quickly i can get chapter 3 up, hopefully not too long.
Confrontation
I feel like i need to legthen chapter 4 primarily in the battle scene and i think i'll put chapter 4 and the epilogue together for submission -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 4: The Cost of Power
At that he started to inch his way towards the battle scene, the rain had soaked his coat; it was way harder for him to move now. another lightning bolt flashed, sparking a fire off in the distance, followed closely by the ear splitting thunder boom.
The Travails of Oliver Otter: Never Play Hockey without a Cup
Still, he enjoyed the movie after that, the transformation into a human, the epic battle scene with “i need a hero”, he could see why it was everyone’s favorite. after the movie, he asked his mom about it.
In Utter Darkness: Chapter 2: It Begins
\<\<\<\>\>\> all right my first attempt at writing a combat scene. sorry, if it sucks but hey that is what comments are for.
Chapter 5: Training Part 2
This was my first combat scene; i would greatly appreciate some tips from you guys on how to write better ones. see you next chapter!**
RJ's Adventure - Chapter 4: Enter Team Storm
I think i did a better job at the battle scene this time. so a new friend and an introduction to the enemy known as team storm. what are their intentions? we will soon find out.
Dimensional Balance Chapter 14: A Rock and a Hard Place
The battle scene in this chapter was kicking my arse hard-core, so please tell me what you think of the final product, that i finally decided was post-worthy. once again, this chapter ended up running long.
Stories of a lifetime Pt. 2
Our live within the battle scene finally has started, for real!" now yuki turned back around, her tail lightly shacking in excitement. after a big bowlful cereals and some poffin for yuki i went to a videophone nearby and called my mother.
Forze Del Male
There '^'; this actually came out a bit longer than i wanted, because i had originally shot for beneath 1000 words, buuut-- nevertheless, "forze del male" was probably one of the hardest things i've ever had to write before - 'how long is too long for a combat scene