Chapter 3-An Unexpected Meeting
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Duty Chapter 25: A Needed Calm
"i guess alex is one of them," he said, "...i mean...uh...i mean...you know...in critical condition..." jerry placed his hand on joji's shoulder, "go home, joji. we can take care of things around here."
Rexi & Talon: 15 -- Rexi
Why was it critically important to send a messenger to the goldsmith, and tell him _do not proceed on my order_. what order? who was zackton working with? why? rexi was practically grinding his teeth.
Chapter 3: Expect the Unexpected
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Obsession
After many observations, i found the term excessive, but i heard him without criticizing. myself, i already knew this feeling, but i will talk you about this soon. little, he often has rejected.
Vargothen - Constructing A Foundation (Session 2)
We take down 2 zombies near us... the 2 zombies moving to the archers take damage as well... the warrior, and ebeis, are both seriously wounded, i am critically wounded at this point...
Enemy, Chapter 3
"the buffer's going critical! the energy is feeding back into the ship's systems and i can't redirect the reaction without causing an overload or a burnout."_ _electronics were smoldering.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Into the Light
Instead of days, the prognosis now indicates a critical failure in 10 hours, give or take a few minutes.
Diaz
Diaz suffers for his art, and is a full subject of the tyranny of appearances whose critical sense of aesthetics has been pushed to an extreme to become inversely proportional to how hideous he's always felt he looked.
Cherry Cordial Chaos
After a few years of turning operating systems into swiss cheese, he became notorious for high quality diagnostics, testing, and response to critical security issues.
D.M.O.N. - Chapter 6: The First Expirience in Battle.
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