A Special Present for a Special Father
Constructive criticism is welcomed as this is my first story i have written. * * * "what a beautiful day" said the white tiger as he stretched and got out of bed.
Red Shadow
I probably won't be accused of killing them; the police know my m.o. and know that i don't use guns, but their captain is a known critic of mine. i'm going to die. i don't know when or where.
The twinning roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
He was choking, the impact severely damaged his chest, having critical consequences on the flareons breathing. revy didn't hesitate or think, she simply ran to help. "bull! are you alright?!!" she asked. the flareon couldn't answer.
The True And Potent SECRETS of SoFurry Story Formatting
_** preparing text for publication on sofurry is a process, and the only critical part to that process is starting off with text formatted in some way not friendly to sofurry's simple web editing entry box.
A Different Kind of Wet Dream
Please leave constructive criticism in the comments to help in bettering my stories.** ** ** **a different kind of wet dream** ** ** _wet, why is it that in most of my dreams i feel wet?
Can a Band-Aid Fix A Reactor Leak?
'critical' meant that the reactor was producing enough energy to sustain itself, 'super critical' meant that the amount of energy it was creating was going up. 'prompt critical' meant bad things. very bad things.
Two Worlds Collide - Prologue
Suggestions and constructive criticisms are welcome. destructive criticisms are not. edit - 4/14/12 - there is an in progress edit of this story, to be updated in the summer.
Writing Tips vol. 2
Don't rage against your critics! it accomplishes nothing except making you look like a huge douche who just rolled up in his douche-mobile and exposed his doucheness.
"Daggers of Darkness" - Prologue
I only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite. story, characters, and related art © 2013-2017 ronald j. lebeck (that's me).
Counter Earth Chronicles Dual Realities Chapter 20: When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can’t Find
Counter Earth Chronicles - Dual Realities **Chapter 20:** **When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can't Find.** April 7th YOE 35 7:22 PM Castle Wundagore, World One (Counter Earth) The hub news was dominated by the...
The Story of the Noble Dragon, Critias
Feel free to give me some constructive criticism, because i would really like this fable to seem relatively legit for what i plan to do with it.