Dog's Life
My first attempt at a transformation story. any criticism of any form would be immensely appreciated, especially if you provide insight on what you think would have made this better!
Blood Red: Chapter Eight: Old Faces (part 2)
Elle muttered to me, stepping to one side slowly and attempting to circle the feral... "i was just about to say the same thing."
Blood Red: Chapter Six: The Return
Lawrence suggested, swivelling in his chair slowly out of the corner of my eye; "but it's more likely the assassination attempt came from the clan, not just one guy.
The Hunger
The evidence to his feeble attempts were his now bound wrists and the soft shackle around his ankle. yes, soft.
Xvmon's Gut Punching Beat Down
Leomon throws down the fist that attempted to punch him, and drives his fist into its owner's, xvmon's gut.
A Dragon Slayer's Heart: Chapter 15 -Darkness-
Talon groaned out in agony, but then attempted to redirect his flame at him, a magical barrier encasing his body once again.
Drunken Lullabies #17
Another attempt at the tail ended up in failure as bartan couldn't quite reach it with his jaws or forepaws, it was up to his hind leg then.
Nightmare: Chapter 1
For not even attempting to intervene. i was no more than 10, maybe 20 feet from them, and still just watched her die like it was a scene in a horror movie.
A Dream: Chp 17 Surprises Entries
I'm not going to go ripping peoples arms off or describing everything, _it will be tame however_ if you complain i will ignore you as _i have attempted to warn you_.
Eternal Flame Ch.1
He felt something on his back and saw nasha was attempting to get up, he helped her and she just took a few uneasy steps and reared up like she was ready to dash off.
A Palce to Belong - Chapter 26
I attempted to nod my head and even that was a challenge. "easy there, i'll get you some water." i recognised the voice now, it was jason.
Ferina III - Chapter 6
But with each attempt, ethelred saw no improvement in his attempts. here, brunhelm intervened, "ethelred, you need to concentrate more. pull the energy through your finger tips.