Editing
editing is the difference between sounding like you know what you are talking about and our stumbling first attempt.
Chapter 2: Edited.
A small lop-eared lapin eyed the bustling streets carefully, her eyes darting to any, and all, sudden movements. Her eyes focusing generally around thighs and tails. She was searching for someone small, perhaps the size of a child, and upon her...
Alone (2013 Edit)
. :) edit: so, as with my other story, i just could not leave it be, and had to reupload my edits. i'm sorry because the second chapter is coming along very slowly seeing as school and work both suck. i promise, i will keep working on it though.
Reborn (re edited)
"When you think to yourself you think life is just planed out for you, that you`ll notice every plot twist coming around the corner and you`ll be in the perfect spot for your life. Shame to say that for some that may be the case but for me......i find...
Inhuman | Epilogue [old edition]
#18 of inhuman [old edition] years go by and many things change, while many more stay the same.
Dragon's Gift - Prologue (EDITED)
#1 of dragon's gift here we go, back to this story at long last, been slowly working on these edits and am ready to start posting the changed chapters. ^.^ i hope you all enjoy the story's more structured edit and have a floofy day ^.^ if you would like to
Anthropia: The Mages (Chanters Edited)
**Mage Types:** There are four different types of mages within the world of Anthropia. These four different types dictate how a mage invokes their powers. A Mage does not get to choose how their power is brought out, that is decided randomly at the...
Scion 2nd Edition Intro
edition.
A Fox in the Woods--revised and edited.
Revised and edited by shayde a mohr. my master purposefully packed various items as i silently padded around the small cabin room.
#SimplyPurrfect (Revised Edition)
I should start from the beginning. Just before the wildlife preserve closed down for the night, I went back to my room for the night when I heard a loud noise off in the distance. Growing suspicious, I go onto the open field looking out for anything...
A New Home (Edited)
Turishma browsed the stalls in the market place of her new home, A realm known as Nareda. She was still taking stock of what happened two or three days ago, even as she loved her new form, she also missed her other home, which had loved ones she so...
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I hit the **yes** option one again and my remaining edit counter went down from 4 to 3.