Two Worlds?

This discusses the basic idea without giving away the plot points i have so please read and give a guy some advice please? tell me if its good, tell me if it's bad. i would love the help, thank you :). hello!

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Relationships part 4

"max please let me explain." "no i'm walking away. dosent that sound so fimilar.gee i wonder what it was hey do you remeber rex cause i sure dont?" he said sarcastically. max kept walking "please! i'm so sorry i abondon you."

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Ander - Chapter 4, Subchapter 47

"no, vallah, please don't cry." she shook in his arms. such a tiny little thing. such a fragile little thing. "please, banno. you have to make her real. it's so cold out there..." "shh... shh... it's okay..."

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Raspberry Line Chapter 7 - The Angry Tiger's Den

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Pongo's Desition (Rewrite)

* * * **chapter 3: story** * * * **authors note:** **please note that this is a rewrite. the original is written by janus oberoth. please leave reviews.

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The Wanderer Part IV

The yena spoke up, "yes please bring me a jar of boiled water and some bandages." the innkeeper looked at the tiger "you have heard him," the tiger said, "and please bring me something sleep on, the bed will be occupied, i fear."

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Raspberry Line Chapter 4 - Accidentally A First Kiss

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Model Citizen (Part 1)

His legs no longer worked and he quickly grew light headed "p-please" he tried to beg as the figure drifted closer. "please" he repeated in his shaky voice.

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Sieg and Marien - A Basitin Love Story - Part 28 - The Last Embers

please, please don't leave me." "i... don't want to..." "then don't! fight it! please..." for a moment, alwyn felt a rush of strength, her heart and mind pushing her to fight.

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An Intro to an Introvert

_please, just go away, please just go away, please just go away, please just go away..._ another minute passed, and there she remained.

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