Target XY
This revision was done by felldewan; https://felldewan.sofurry.com/ some days, i wondered how i ever survived during gym class. heck, as far as i knew, none of my powers were useful in the practice of "deathball".
Lightstreak Character Description
#2 of roleplay-characters this is a more revised and refined character sheet / description of a role play character of mine. i am considering posting the role play server and room location so if any of my watchers want to join in they can.
The Pillow Book of Sethira: Entry Two
**a/n:** last revised 3/11/2023 for grammar. * * * i mentioned a meeting in my last entry. this is because a while ago, andarria had told me she wanted to set one up.
Splintered Light, Chapter 7.2: It's All In The Cards
Quickly revising his plan, the chief engineer spoke to the wolf, who was still in position. "collect whatever portion of the line and hose we have remaining, mr. brown." the wolf responded immediately without compliant "yes, sir."
Zappy Zaps, Zappy Zapped
They were going to have to rely on the classic scientific method of guess, test and revise till they found a way to put this thing in reverse mode. after studying wires for a bit, nait noticed two wires were bigger than others.
Forging Bonds-Chapter 4: Placement Exam
Looking at the clock when i neared the end of the exam, i realized that i still had time remaining, so i went back over to the questions i believed to know the answer after working them out, namely some of the derivatives and revising passages.
Willem and Rolf - The Revolt at Castle Minas
I did my best with this one and revised it a bunch of times and obsessed over it and i'm still not sure how i feel about it. but, it's a state that tells the little story i wanted to tell!
A Warrior's Heart, Chapter 15
She knew her way around the ferret and the sisko was a similar model, though a few revisions newer. while they were both middle aged by starship standards, there was still plenty of life left in both of them.
A Lamb Among Wolves Ch:31
(note: re-read this and consider revising it or shifting it to a later section.) sufficed to say, the ewe is somehow fooled by the wolf's act.
Shadow Warrior: The Great Enemy - Ch.3 Revised
**Shadow Warriors: The Great Enemy** **Chapter 3: General Brutahn and Captain Sharde'** **Author: Cjdstruction** While Larren and the rest of the Shadow Warriors are fast approaching on their way to Kahalleris, A large force coming from a different...
Shadow Warrior: The Great Enemy - Ch.2 Revised
Shadow Warriors Chapter 2: The Dark Fangs Written By: Cjdstruction While I was heading for Kahalleris, I've been recalling my memories of my mother. Always so kind and gentle, like all mothers should be. Always helping on the times of my needs. She...
Thane of Hearts, Parts Two (and Part one, revised)
This upload contains a revised part one and the whole new part two 30 pages, 6000 words; viking-age history/fantasy tale. part one _to battle!