Grocery Store Dancer
Dallman november 12, 2003 version 1.02 revision date: 12/11/2004 hi, all. it's been a long time since i've posted anything, but here a little thing i wrote to piss off a friend (need i add his name is howard?)
Merlin's Revenge Chapter 19
revision of history was the in thing after all. if you didn't like how yesterday went, change it. everyone knew a person's memory was a fickle thing. did she have it on video? was there witnesses?
All in the History Books Now (Revision 1)
22nd May, 2016. "Thank you so much for your help," the soft voiced goat said as she picked up her books off the table. "No problem, ma'am," I replied, "Just don't forget the DVDs are due back in a week, not a month like the books okay?" "Don't you...
My dad is dead (revised)
I don't know if I miss him or not. Did I really know him? What was I for him? Was I his redemption? Did I really care about him or was my relation to him just selfishness? I wonder if it is supposed to feel like in normal families. My dad was an...
The History Of Zato -Revision-; The Dormant Demon
(((It's finally here! Shocking, I know. Muses are fickle bitches. Anyways, Zato, story, and etc are Copywritten myself. Enjoy the story.))) "Are you sure about this, Ragna? You never know what a dragon might do, let...
Petals of the Gods - Ch. 3: City of Coexistence (Eng)
I revised my order and ordered a melon cup. the tiger then looked at me in disgust and said, "the ice cream you ordered also has red melons in it. ugh." i shook my head and thought to myself, what the old woman has against me.
Nothing I Ever Had part I
"now this is general and doesn't contain every line and every revision, but it does contain most of them and all the common ones.
Oueti Tale Of The Forged Part 1
This is a revised version of my story i had uploaded earlier this week. hope you enjoy! _i awake. i feel the blinding light in my eyes, "this stinks", i say._ _when i feel the cold metal against my fur, i get a shivering thought, "where am i?"
Blood, Sweat, and Diesel: Chapter 7 (Revised)
Jeff Paulsen was one of the few male Coyotes on the Altama who wasn't a Guerilla, fighting against the Balfor army. He had good reasons for that. Looking at him, you could tell that he was old, getting into his sixties. But that wasn't much of an...
Splintered Light, Chapter 1.3: Facing the Moonrise
Rolf revised his tact. "then let's go visit viktor, shall we?" the simple suggestion quickly changed the foreman's entire demeanor and a smile very nearly snuck past his dour expression.
Joined in Mind and Body - Chapter 5
I also need to review all data records from the duration of the fault and potentially revise a lot of information, now that my processing systems are not clouded by lust."
Descendant: Chapter 3; New Developments
For now there was some much needed revision if he was ever going to communicate with star, or any other pokémon for that matter in pokéspeak without completely embarrassing himself.