Of Skyscrapers and Taxi drivers... Chapter 1: Cats, Snow, and a Doorman
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Chapter 12
I hope you like it, don't forget to leave feedback, tell me if i make mistakes, i want this to be a good story, so i've gotta fix the mistakes! can't wait to hear from you all!!
The Disciplinarian
This was requested by peacemaker9669 over on fa, and also uploaded to my 'bacentwrites' fa account, so if you'd like to possibly request something, feel free to contact me and as these are freebies, i do want people to give honest feedback about it to help
Those Who Soar. Chapter 4
I hope you enjoyed the chapter, and i'm always glad to hear feedback. thank you, and as always happy reading -fallen
2020 A.D. Part 1 [unfinished]
#11 of alte geschichte/old story fiction© shane translate and correction © arkoninu thumbnail © jugg4 i would be really happy to get feedback, but please keep in mind this is not the end version of this story.
Raspberry Line Chapter 2 - Cimmanon Roll
Please consider giving me feedback. if you prefer a more guided approach, please respond to the following: 1. if anything about this submission was compelling or immersive to you, please explain what it was and why it resonated so strongly. 2.
Track and Field: Part I
Feel free to leave some feedback. i'd greatly appreciate knowing what you guys think! it all started on the track. that concrete loop is honestly one of my least favorite places to be. why?
The Tunnel
As always, do provide feedback! i look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing.
A Lunar Tide
At least you have someone that can offer feedback, instead mumbling to yourself._\> she joked. looking at her for a moment but, it wasn't a bad way to look at the situation.
Blood, Sweat, and Diesel: Chapter 1
feedback is appreciated, so please comment, rate, and if you like it, watch! i think it's safe to say that i've met with some very unsavory smells in my time. if i was a canid, i bet it'd be even worse.
Inferno High - Chapter 24
Enjoy, leave some feedback, and... i always mess this up have to retype it... screw it! enjoy! i threw open alex's bedroom door and saw him crying into a pillow. "alex, i didn't know he was gonna do that!"
Spiral Nebula - Chapter 1
"i want your feedback on a few of the officers i chose the fleet," he said, ignoring yelena's statement. the computer was activated and the young admiral opened the same files from last night.