The D Virus: Chapter 1 (Rough draft)
One last note: please comment and give feedback! i'd like to know what the readers think. p.s. i changed it a bit from the preview and posting from phone so the spacing between paragraph somehow isn't working d: the d virus.
Jay's Love (Prologue)
feedback is greatly appreciated \<3 \*\*\* none of us knew his real name, but everyone called him kit. he was the most beautiful kitten i've ever seen.
First Moon Pt. 2
Feel free to read and comment i love any feedback i get as all writers do. have a great day and enjoy. adrian stood still; he heard something. his ears turned to the direction of the sound. the sound came from behind him.
Prologue: Minraya
* * * **so yeah i have decided start my path as a writer making some little stories about war, don't worry thought i am don't too edgy, please leave your comments with feedback and critique so i can make better writing in the future**. **thanks!
Getting By, Intro (Short Story Series)
feedback is always welcome be it positive or negative. thank you to those of you who take the time to read it, hope you enjoy.
Small descriptive story (creative writing college work)
#1 of small storys, clean works this story was a part of my college work but like my last story i will post it online so others may see it and give constructive feedback.
Only Because I Care ( Part 1 )
feedback is welcome! * * * only because i care by janecat part i putting his jacket on as he pushed the exit doors open, nightwind finally was out of that cramped office building. "thank god my shift is over", he mumbled to himself.
Zootopia: The Initiative - Chapter 1
I'd love the feedback and will try to respond to most of them if not directly then by addressing whatever the issue is. i can't wait to get to know some of you out there!
Runaway
I am new to writing stories so i would love feedback. i will also upload all i have completed that day by 8:00 pm that day. hope you enjoy it. sorry for the late upload.
A New Lifestyle
This is my first story that i have made, there is more done, and my friend has edited a bit already, i would love any feedback on how to make my writing better, although a bit shorter than what i would have liked, so the next parts will most likely be longer
From That Night On. Chapter 2.
Enjoy as always feedback is welcom via pm. rate. comment.
Chapter One: The Cold Beginning
Thank you for reading i know that it is not much but this is a first for me so please tell me if it is any go if i get good feedback i will write more