LAWT #12 ~ Sincere [Faking Pt.2]
I didn't proofread or revise this. i just want it off my table. alex let the door to the bar close behind him as he stopped to survey the crowd. it was markedly busier than last time, but the atmosphere was still rather low energy and calm.
The making of a book cover - A heresy story
Not to mention that a bit of distance means that you end up doing _yet another_ revision in order to appease that nagging detail-gremlin in your ear. ## **final words** sd is like a puzzle with a variety of solutions, and my approach isn't universal, though
Splintered Light, Chapter 1.3: Facing the Moonrise
Rolf revised his tact. "then let's go visit viktor, shall we?" the simple suggestion quickly changed the foreman's entire demeanor and a smile very nearly snuck past his dour expression.
Prologue
The version i am posting is a late revision -- major changes may still occur before it is finalized, whatever that may entail.
Jeremy; List Of Species
Its speculated that history prior to the continental wars has been revised to hide a purposeful attempt at exterminating skunks. they however brush this off. it may just be that they never were very populous.
Story of the Year
Be back in an hour with another draft... for your editor's revisions." "sure thing, hon," he replied, as george got up. just like he did on the phone after the same promise, thought the cat. it was nice having him here. the end.
MoonDust, Chapter 1
Without their willingness to put up with my sloppy revisions and an angsty, complaining caribou, this book would be nowhere near as good as it is.
Hero, Chapter 3 - A Book
Keep in mind that there may be some discrepancies between this and the following chapters which haven't been revised. reya half expected to find her brother sternly waiting for her as she walked into her den.
Story of My Life.
We always did two of them, the first then a revision to get it right. not that any plan is fool proof, but we liked to think it was as close as it got. the others, they were regular insurance meetings.
Are We Not Men?
I'm surprisingly eloquent when drunk, though i tend to re-use words too often; i did revise this, of course, but who knows if i missed something. bit of a short, slicey one this time, but i had a bunch of things that i just wanted to happen.
A Correspondence of City Mice: York.
Houston, i guess your count keeps having to get revised. it's five, now, and only nineteen escaped. i hope that doesn't change. "the padre taught me a rhyme," houston grinned.
Decidophobia - A Submision for Prompt 15 of the Writing Prompt Group
This was not a promise of youth restored but of a revised end of life. i felt cheated by time and circumstance.** **"the opening of this nexus does not obey our commands or desires.