Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 4 - Past Prologue (Revised Edition)
#4 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 4 - past prologue location: eastvale village - gia continent - terra freya woke up with a start, she peered into the darkness of her room, she had been sleeping peacefully until she
MagnaFlame Renamon part 1
((this story is now revised)) damn that hurt. that guy sure knows how to throw a punch, but i'm getting head of myself.
Tales of the Huntsville Mayors #8- The Ides of December
The commissioner already told me it was going to need a lot of revisions, but he did stress the escape clause that you advised i put in at the bottom." leo set down the black mug on calico's desk, which had a bright orange "14" on its side.
Prologue
The version i am posting is a late revision -- major changes may still occur before it is finalized, whatever that may entail.
LAWT #12 ~ Sincere [Faking Pt.2]
I didn't proofread or revise this. i just want it off my table. alex let the door to the bar close behind him as he stopped to survey the crowd. it was markedly busier than last time, but the atmosphere was still rather low energy and calm.
The making of a book cover - A heresy story
Not to mention that a bit of distance means that you end up doing _yet another_ revision in order to appease that nagging detail-gremlin in your ear. ## **final words** sd is like a puzzle with a variety of solutions, and my approach isn't universal, though
Splintered Light, Chapter 1.3: Facing the Moonrise
Rolf revised his tact. "then let's go visit viktor, shall we?" the simple suggestion quickly changed the foreman's entire demeanor and a smile very nearly snuck past his dour expression.
Of the Collective, Chapter 2
Consensus needs to be revised. two of the subjects are unavailable, two bodies will not be needed for some time. representative suggests that one of us interview navigator rika fischer while another interviews adham.
Hero, Chapter 3 - A Book
Keep in mind that there may be some discrepancies between this and the following chapters which haven't been revised. reya half expected to find her brother sternly waiting for her as she walked into her den.
Story of My Life.
We always did two of them, the first then a revision to get it right. not that any plan is fool proof, but we liked to think it was as close as it got. the others, they were regular insurance meetings.
Are We Not Men?
I'm surprisingly eloquent when drunk, though i tend to re-use words too often; i did revise this, of course, but who knows if i missed something. bit of a short, slicey one this time, but i had a bunch of things that i just wanted to happen.
A Correspondence of City Mice: York.
Houston, i guess your count keeps having to get revised. it's five, now, and only nineteen escaped. i hope that doesn't change. "the padre taught me a rhyme," houston grinned.