Chasing the Sun - Chapter 44: They Whose Blood Does Not Flow
"third revision file for operation red wolf 2. signora lucia wants us to study it before coming to the next meeting." richard took it and stared at it. "did you read it, oliver?" "...no." the ibex slumped on the desk.
R-Evolution: 01:Awakening
I'm not a professional writer, i just do it in my free time, so all constructive criticism is welcome :d as it stands this is a rough draft, but i have a bad habit of not revising anything until more of the project is finished, so there still may be some
A Writing Study: Frontier Psychiatrist
(https://creative.oldpines.wtf/library/fiction/short_fiction/the-valley/) his prompt for me was to write 1,500 words (which i revised downward to 1,100) on [frontier psychiatrist.](https://www.youtube.com/watch?
"The Gift": Richard's (SF) Storyline, Ch 4, Part 2
If i'd thought about it a little more at the time i might have revised what i said next. once there was a break in the conversation i turned to the wolves. "hey...
Breadcrumbs (Book7, chapter11)
I write it, i post it... and then later i'll revise it and repost the revisions just like i did with book1 and such. if it seems a little more rough around the edges, or the dialogues seem to drone on a bit... well that is why. it's all rough.
Little Blue - Short Story - Mech Donkey
Written october 2000, revised for english april 2004 at the start of the 'battle of the titanium horse' edited may 2015 for release. teamidris
College life: Chapter 1
#1 of college life _uh yeah, well if you read my journal you'll understand that unfortunately i couldn't focus on revision and ended up spending a shitload of time writing this holiday (which i kind of regret now since my exams start in about 3 weeks).
The Cohen Clover, Ch 9
With the afternoon come-and-gone, mason revised his plan and pushed through the rest of the day, doubling up on his effort to complete all of his tasks promptly; he got so far ahead, in fact, that he was able to call his work complete an hour before he normally
Phil's Bebopin' experience
Seems the 3d glasses will have to be revised before showing to new patrons. as for phil himself... "i feel really good!
To Love
Unlike most of my older things, i haven't revised it much since i wrote it, so the quality might be somewhat lower than my other stories (it was during my thick-chokey-inundation-of-description phase).
Realisation - Chapter 12
He silently thanked his tiger for helping him with revision last night, not that he thought it would help him at all.
War's Oversight - Chapter 03
Nowadays, anything sent to the logistics department under the heading "requisition" was likely to get the revised 'ok3.' or rather, ok3. _okay, okay, okay!