The End and The Beginning - Character Sheet - Aran Winwood
+2 15 (+2) dexterity 11 12 (+1) constitution 14 +3 17 (+1) intelligence 11 11 (+0) wisdom 11 11 (+0) charisma 12 13 (+1) [features & traits] second wind (1d10+9 hp/rest) fighting style (superior technique) action surge (+1 action/rest) improved critical
Forging of Shadows
Feel free to criticize. i can take it :) my grammar isn't all that great. a smell of fire and smoke filled the late night air. an amber glow of flames filters through the lone window of the room.
The Story of the Noble Dragon, Critias
Feel free to give me some constructive criticism, because i would really like this fable to seem relatively legit for what i plan to do with it.
Pale Blue Dot - Blurb
Today, he is hosting a herbivore scholar from ares, discussing a collaborative project critical to his doctoral thesis. as he grapples with past memories and the nuances of their interaction, he is approached by a strange mutt.
Akseli's biography
Skills: - increase his defense in 20% when is in critical condition and turns immune to dragon and ice type attacks.
Rubberducking
Constructive criticism is welcomed. pithon readjusted his spectacles from collar and onto his black eyes. pithon eyes stared at the ide, the black screen being filled with colorful lines of texts and numbers.
Zero Point: Chapter 2- Brave New World
Warning: power levels critical.
Release
As always, comments and constructive criticism is welcome. :) -- release -- my trembling fingers reach for the latch. raccoons chitter and scratch from within the cage.
The Homecoming (aka A Test of Writing Skill)
Also, any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! i'd love to post more stories here in the future._ the snow came down heavily, obscuring his vision.
Boy or Girl?
If i tried to be myself they criticized me for my interests. if i tried to be more feminine they could only talk about how it was about time i acted like a "real" little girl.
The rise Of the lonestar
After suffering so much criticism world wide and loathing. america had finally got the worlds attention. both out of fear which was the prevailing thought and silently and perhaps hidden a sense of awe. and reverence and respect and also they own pride.
Work In Progress - Magic Show
Please try to be constructive with your criticisms._ the circus was back in town. for the majority, this meant time to gather up the kids, make sure you had a lot of money, and get ready to go home tired but thrilled.