Adapting to Change: Chapter 1 Part 1

Too many seperated paragraphs for people talking? not enough grammatical correction? am i not sticking with one way of storytelling? are you still reading this? think you can give me a little criticism? or maybe a lot? would you like more?

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Journey to Another World pt2 ch51

#1 of journey to another world pt2 journey to another world 4 ch. 1 if you've been keeping up with the story so far, just jump ahead a few paragraphs. or if you've forgotten some things... (author: welcome back to the journey.

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Demonic Possession

The paragraph beside the picture described a demon called a garr. the demon was actually a monster from another world that had been summoned to earth. because of its demonic nature the garr could transform any man that it chose into a garr as well.

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Angel Eyes and Ocean Tears

I'm following things in the sebastian-dante-sebastian order of narration, so in the beginning of this, each paragraph block is happening simultaneously unless i've distinguished otherwise.

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With No Working Title - Prologue

My brain decided to mutiny against me after the first two paragraphs and i'm actually pretty happy about it. hope you guys enjoy, and please leave a comment with your thoughts and any editing i may have missed.

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A Pleasant Coming Out

_comments (the constructive type) are welcome, and see if you can catch the paragraph i borrowed from douglas adam's hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy too!

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Ragefire (Hueroc/Ellora)

The mage didn't look up for a little while, perhaps reading to the end of a sentence or paragraph or page... but then finally he raised his head, blinked, and said, "ah! hueroc.

Hell on Earth. Chapter 7

The others had all contained paragraphs saying the same thing: dragons were believed to exist in theory, but had never been seen. anar's language studies were woefully inaccurate, but this book seemed to talk about them as though they were real.

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4 - Contemplations on Divinity [Incomplete]

The form of the writing was at times confusing for darzarath, the dragon's mind being put-off by seemingly random tangents the elf lost herself in mid-paragraph. but the more she read, more she understood.

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Drakensang Prologue

" - that does it - said the first officer finally being able to stand straight - commander garathy; i am hereby relieving you of your command, under the law of galactic confederation paragraph 7223 sub section 212b for no longer being fit for duty, as you

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Life in Yiggow Chapter 6

Berkeley was surprised that douglas was on his conclusion paragraph of his paper. berkeley read what was on the computer screen and saw that his wolf friend had done the paper half scholarly, the other half was pure bs.

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Finding Family Chapter 4

She finished the paragraph she was on, before marking her place and putting the book down. indy reappeared at the door, wondering if she'd been so absorbed in the textbook that she hasn't heard him. it wouldn't have been the first time.

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