Please comment so i can improve the poem to
the whisper of light comeing throgh the dark mind. a world away but so close in time. i walk blindly on this road deep inside. i fall over past memorys throwing me off and down in so many ways.
Dread, Fear, Pain, Poem, mind
_dance with the music_
time is slowing
and without knowing
i fall into the sound
enrapturing movement
room for improvement
look at what i've found
so much beauty in the night
i have lost my sense of right
listen to the sounds of time
fear
Poetry, life
It leaves no room for imagination, and no space for ability, intelligence, or improvement. you could just call perfection a dead end; a condition of hopelessness.
people, perfection, speech
Kage only nodded in acknowledgment, staying ever silent and stoic despite his teammates enthusiasm to improve on their abilities. hageshi however, had his own statement to say.
"i will improve on my own terms..."
Aggron, Delphox, Fanfiction, Greninja, Lucario, Pokemon, Riolu, Salamence, Story Series, Team Valiant, Typhlosion, Vaporeon, blaziken, samurott, zoroark
How to relate when
i have seen a thousand outcomes for a planet
caught galaxies on fire and stopped time
worked to improve my life by destroying my being
these were mere child's play
old and weak; hard to imagine my future
Burn, Death, Dimension, Fire, Home, Poem, Young, galaxy, goals, life, old, slow, strong, weak
Hope y'all're doing okay, and hopefully life improves for all of us. :)
edit: i done goofed and uploaded this as a story instead of a journal. no way to change it, so i'll have to set it hidden soon.
Journal, Thoughts, writing
The plastic molded furniture was not an improvement to his overall comfort, especially combined with the soft rumble of the machines that surrounded him.
Corgi, Laundromat
We all love to talk about
those who have improved their
lives. waged their wars.
conquered their bodies,
their fears, their problems
and come out on top.
but what about those of us
who have not?
Poem, Poetry, personal
And this instinct to overcome our failures keeps most of us going, improving, and growing.
Happy, Love, No-Yiff, Quote, Spoken Word, You, forgiveness, life, loss, speech