Rubberducking
Constructive criticism is welcomed. pithon readjusted his spectacles from collar and onto his black eyes. pithon eyes stared at the ide, the black screen being filled with colorful lines of texts and numbers.
Forging of Shadows
Feel free to criticize. i can take it :) my grammar isn't all that great. a smell of fire and smoke filled the late night air. an amber glow of flames filters through the lone window of the room.
The Story of the Noble Dragon, Critias
Feel free to give me some constructive criticism, because i would really like this fable to seem relatively legit for what i plan to do with it.
Akseli's biography
Skills: - increase his defense in 20% when is in critical condition and turns immune to dragon and ice type attacks.
Lost Pieces
Constructive criticisms are always welcome, so i can understand where i can approve on. the come to dust and burn down the tower characters in lost pieces are copyrighted to tiberius rings.
Release
As always, comments and constructive criticism is welcome. :) -- release -- my trembling fingers reach for the latch. raccoons chitter and scratch from within the cage.
The rise Of the lonestar
After suffering so much criticism world wide and loathing. america had finally got the worlds attention. both out of fear which was the prevailing thought and silently and perhaps hidden a sense of awe. and reverence and respect and also they own pride.
Boy or Girl?
If i tried to be myself they criticized me for my interests. if i tried to be more feminine they could only talk about how it was about time i acted like a "real" little girl.
Work In Progress - Magic Show
Please try to be constructive with your criticisms._ the circus was back in town. for the majority, this meant time to gather up the kids, make sure you had a lot of money, and get ready to go home tired but thrilled.
The Homecoming (aka A Test of Writing Skill)
Also, any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! i'd love to post more stories here in the future._ the snow came down heavily, obscuring his vision.
Worlds Apart - Epilogue
Your compliance is critical to the future of the human race and your cooperation is absolutely essential to our survival. together we will end this threat.
Flamur's biography
Skills: - immune to sleep and changes of state in critical state curiosities: curiosities: - his tattoos mysteriously appeared when entering a temple of arceus and made friends with a delphox but does not remember his name.