Tuff Ch. 1 and 2
work in progress, comments and criticisms appreciated and welcomed. first time writer, hoping to continue this into a short story or novel. thanks for reading!
through kindness :chapter 1
Ok this isnt a permanent title, its just temporary until i come up with a new one. also this is a work in progress, so comment on what i need to fix or what i should add to it. this is my first story and it would be awhile until i would upload the 2nd chapter
Okamik vol1, Chapter 1-3
\*this story is a work of fiction and is work in progress. any and all constructive comments are appreciated, hope you enjoy\* the okamik world the small room echoed in a manor that suggested a much larger space was present than existed as a robed
Chapter 2: Woods Of the Valley
#2 of echoes in delows valley so... now we get to see more residents of delows valley as well as the female lead of the story one thing i do want to mention is that the chapter title is a work in progress, i'm not honestly 100% sold on the title, yet i'm
Counter Earth Chronicles Dual Realities Chapter 52: Everything Wrong Is the Fault Of Someone Else
**"it is a work in progress. we will set down in the forest south of the city."** demona directed. ed nodded. he and jonan landed right next to harpy who was carrying dane. "not as bad as world three or world four.
The Full Moon Package
It was a work in progress. abby had decided to pass the time by giving in to her animal instincts. she laid on her back as she chewed on the wooden leg of her coffee table. why? because it was there and she could.
A Lamb Among Wolves Ch:12
Dawn mumbled, hitting the save button on her work in progress. dawn was rather groggy, the inevitable end result of a rather poor nights sleep.
Chosen: Chapter One
The visual novel game is a work in progress and i will pop the link to it below because it has been fantastic to see the artwork of these characters truly bring them to life! i will be posting one chapter per week for ten weeks of this one.
Outcast - Chapter 21
This is the first recording i've done in my new digs, so room treatment is still a work in progress. i think i've done well to kill the echo, but i'll keep improving as i go. after all, i've only been here for a few weeks.
Pokemon - Tale Of The Guardian Master - CH 128
The rest is still a work in progress." the snake laughed. "h-hey! so maybe i like to joke around and have some fun! doesn't mean i'm not an adult!" he affirmed before scowling. "i'm just quirky..." he grumbled.
FoxFire (Act1, Book2, Chapter8)
#8 of twilight of the gods book2 this is sinopa as a work in progress. that's tamamo on the blade, as she communicates with sinopa via reflective surfaces. the explanation as to why is tamamo's story to tell.
Chapter Five
It is somewhat a work in progress." they discussed the rogue for the rest of the afternoon, till brook gave him a mental poke and let him know it was dinner time. "well, i think you could stand for some more food in you, i hope you enjoy it.