Wolves' Legacy 3: Chapter 2

I am still trying to experimenting of using a first person hybrid with third person narrative, but i am not sure if it will work out or not. critics and comments are welcome.

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London Entry #2 - Date Number Four (Revenge) - Part 1

There was even enough for a third person and maybe a fourth to fit in. "i'm going to have so much fun cooking," ian responded. "you know how to cook?" i teased, obviously knowing he could. "shut up! that's how i wooed you," ian said, shoving into me.

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Runaways Chapter one: The trigger’s been pulled; it has signaled a new start.

The wolf asked in third person reference. i don't respond. he doesn't like that. with a quick step forward he drives his fist into my gut forcing all the air out of my lungs and dropping me to my knees.

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Growvember Epilogue

It was in the third person, explaining everything happening to everyone. i found one passage talking about chris. _chris looked up at the titanic bunny, feeling a bit jealous.

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Half-Toon pt.3

This last part came when simon realized that there was a third person standing at the door. groaning as he got up chester managed to prop himself up.

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Isolation-Excerpt 30-The Scientific Method

Wrong when i arrived back at the lab, sarah, allen and a third person were waiting there.

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Glass Hearts

"i'm trying to explain-" he began, but was cut off by a third person clearing their throat. "is something wrong?" the familiar voice said. jason and henry both turned to see kenny standing tall with a grocery bag in his right hand.

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Another Chance: Chapter 1

It was more of a biography than a story that went over the early life of mozart in a third person narrative. it wasn't good, in fact, garret never would have touched it if he hadn't forgotten his own books at home on his bed, ready to be packed.

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Spyro the Relaxing chapter one.

"i cannot tell you about cynder and your destiny being in twined, but i can tell you this third person isn't supposed to be." chronicler said dimly. "supposed to be? what does that mean?" spyro asked yet again.

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Resurfacing

Let's just say it's a bit confusing to be writing a story from someone's point of view, when you've written stories about them in the third person. i literally had to go through my whole story and take out all the chloe did this's and chloe did that's.

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