Writing Tips vol. 4
Unless jim is the pov character, this is an omniscient statement. it's very easy to do. this only works if you are writing a true omniscient point of view.
Writing Tips vol. 2
The only time you don't need separation is when you are writing the omniscient view. the one thing i would caution you against, is switching the perspective of the viewpoints.
Writing Tips
Are they omniscient? or are they still stuck in one character's viewpoint? you can also spice up your story by having multiple viewpoints from different characters. just make sure you have some kind of separation between them.
Pitch
We follow the perspective of a traditionally omniscient narrator for this first section, as it's purely to hint at and introduce the basic premise of this earth.
All's Fair - Part 1
After all, there was trouble and then there was _trouble_, and he wasn't omniscient. he nodded crisply and pointed out my seat. we were placed two to a table, and my new companion did not look especially pleased to see me either.
Omniscient Third
#1 of short stories **omniscient third** **by glycanthrope** allow me to introduce myself: i am a fly. a very ordinary housefly, at times drab black and grey, at other times iridescent as light reflects off of my body and wings and turns to colour.
Mini: The Omniscience Engine
omniscient artificial intelligence. you are in my world, and you dare to break it.' i fell to my knees. 'damn you... give me back my family. get me out of here.' 'i cannot answer your first request. but the second one i can.'
Warm Up - 8
His omniscience did not detect the surroundings of this world, nor sector, nor realm, nor reality. he had been dreamt of rather, by another.
Hedona Chapter 3 - The Voice that Sought Silence
As his seemingly omniscient knowledge weighed on my conscience, i wanted to run, but just like with my own shadow, i could only escape it by plunging myself into darkness.
The Creed: X
With that, the jackal smiled with her omniscient eyes and pulled away into the night of the city. nervously, i stepped up to the door of the apartment building and knocked.
Luna and Thief Ch: 27
Luna and Thief Chapter 27: Along Frozen Shores: A glow of bright light flickered and flashed against gentle warm fur, a warmth beyond any other swirled against his chest as his heart gently throbbed and pressed against the air. It was that cold...
Delving Deep.
The striving, omniscient, self capitulating behemoth of inner resolve. to gaze upon its bald face is to see eternity itself. the ability to not merely confront any obstacle, but stare it down into dissolution.