Dimensional Balance: A Trainer's Tale
These first two chapters are going to be primarily character and worldbuilding, as due to the nature of this story, i need to do a lot of info dumping. please comment!
Writing Tips vol. 2
Avoid info dumping! try to break up explanations, spread things out. maybe something doesn't have to be told right now. it can be referenced again later.
Cat Island, Chapter 1
Edited for clarity; i took out the large 'info dump' paragraph about the plan, should flow smoother now. chapter 1: stormclouds and mist mist, mist, and more mist. that was all she could see. an endless sea of fog, with no determinable end.
Across the Rift 12
"okay, if i'm going to be leaving and traveling off to who knows were, then i'm gonna need some intel on the political scene, i needa know everything, and i figure this is as good as any time to get an info dump."
[THE WORLD] of Monsters - Chapter 01
Asks lousid -naaah, chloe's trapped with ell info dumping about some 90's snack fruit snack. explains butters. -wha? why's that?
Jacks Tail: Chapter-18-Epilogue-Jackie-Strader-age-sixteen
It's also a bit of an info dump for the place. it's also the end of the major adjustment arc. there's still things she's going to have to learn etc.
Skylands: the Scorpion Spear, Part One - “Saeldrin”, Chapter Three: The Seekers
(it does feel a bit like an info-dump.) original draft - pre-editing this story was written as part of the 2016 national novel writing month. it was written without edits between 12:01am, november 1st and 11:59pm, november 30th.
A Lamb Among Wolves Ch:31
Dawn texted, preparing the rabbit for the oncoming info dump. _"to start with, vernon's father hates me.
Starfall: Chapter 5: Welcome To Earth?
As for this chapter, this is more or less a barely disguised info dump. usako learns about bio-morphs. the united states circa 2100 in the bio-morph world. as well as the origin of the foods she's been eating.
Chapter VIII: Ideals, Part Two
While someone else might not appreciate the info-dump, the judges surely would enjoy the exposition. "well then, i think we have enough information to make a decision, would it be unanimous through the tribunal?"
Coaxial (part 2)
Increased info dump rate, double the exams, and a lesson regimen that would've been a struggle for someone three years older than me. he wasn't too happy when i lagged behind, despite the fact i was passing grade, if barely."
Tales from the BellHunterVerse Ch1
Every call from home from that point forward yuri would receive an unwanted info-dump on his much-beloved runt of a brother.