Act Your Age at the Mall
Act Your Age at the Mall Hunter whimpered as his mom led him into the family restroom by the paw. Thanks to his insistence that she allow him to wear a t-shirt and shorts over his Barney onesie, he looked for all the world like a normal...
Vocabulary
There's a comment section for a reason ~bartan bartan's vocabulary ...because we swear this bear is from another planet sometimes. species: -dragon = a rather broad term for a species, really. but i usually go with something more on the scaly side.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
To ease any concerns, i would say that a lot of the time we speak using a selection of common words: a sort of core vocabulary language speakers often use.
COMM - Just Lion Around - Commission for Jensen - Prologue -
This granted their malleable young minds the rich vocabulary, knowledge and core directives they would be compelled to obey. a few, _very_few, were given a completely additional imprint...pause."
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 185
The quiet wolf whose entire vocabulary seemed to consist entirely of surly grunts and the occasional nod. and he looked mad as hell. * * * sorry for the short upload. the next ones will be longer.
Meeting Love - Chapter 1
I stumbled over my words, my vocabulary escaping me, my worry and panic taking over my feeble mind. i stopped myself from stuttering and gulped. "hi there..." i spoke with a mix of happiness and embarrassment, excitement and nervousness.
Ad Hoc Vocabulary (Otherwise Untitled)
~ The edges of the badger's lips curled with surprise as the sandwich slipped from amongst his fingers. Deft hands sprung to action, giving chase while a profane exclamation began to solidify deep in his gut just below his diaphram. It was as the...
Pokemons Gift Chapter 9: Another Pair
Terra nodded enthusiastically she needed more signs in her vocabulary, and ark needed to practice more. "okay lessons now, adair tomorrow." ark smiled, feeling better. they practiced by the light of the fire.
"The Gift", Richard's (SF) Chapter 1, Part 5
I attempted to agree with him, using my limited spanish vocabulary. "yes. i love all of my gifts. i have them with me because i love them all. which one do you like most?"
Underneath the Wars
This will be incomplete, but i am hoping you will comment as i go along and help me fix my mistakes in grammar, spelling, vocabulary, logic, geography, physics, etc. anything you see that looks odd, let me know, please.
New Perspective, Chapter One: Denial
He was always polite, and he would often talk his ways out of conflict using a vocabulary obviously above a tenth grader. he was clearly perfect. everything aiden wasn't. "dude, what's with that stare?
Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
It was like an unimaginable miracle that kyurex used such vocabulary. revy stepped forward. "kyu?" no reaction. bulltreio wasn't finished, he wanted to get his revenge. "what? me idiot?" his body caught flames.