Everyone's A Critic
"Shit, SHIT, **SHIT...** _fuck."_ Failure was not an option. "24th time" A voice calls. If there was one thing Amelia was entirely incapable of doing, it was controlling a vehicle within a video game, a rather disturbing fact to many close to her,...
Gleam of Silver Flash of Gold Chapter 2
William stood before his parents questioning them on what happened to him last night. He could not recall how he had gotten into bed and the things that he could remember from last night were dim. When he tried to remember what eluded him, memories...
Glimpses of You
Rhawn was a white tiger male, and people would say he had it all, looks, brains, money, fame, and hair. He was a movie star making billions with millions of adoring fans. His movie career had him working in films that all turned into blockbusters. The...
Missing You Completely
Rhawn was a white tiger male, and people would say he had it all, looks, brains, money, fame, and hair. He was a movie star making billions with millions of adoring fans. His movie career had him working in films that all turned into blockbusters. The...
Meant for Someone
\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*BEEEEEEEP-BEEEEEEEEEP\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* A hand went out to shut the alarm but the owner was already awake. Rhys, a fox with fur a pale golden color didn't need the alarm clock, but still it was something familiar from better...
Test Fight Scene - Criticism Needed
He exhaled sharply, gripping his daggers in both paws tighter than ever. This enemy was unlike anyone he had faced before. His movements were erratic, yet precise. His attacks were random, but concise. The fact that he had even managed to block that...
Let's play a guessing game + First story by Me!
Get reading and leave me those criticisms!
Blackfoot - Pathfinder Custom Race
**fighter** : add a +1/2 circumstance bonus on critical hit confirmation rolls with a weapon of the fighter's choice (maximum bonus +4). this bonus does not stack with critical focus.
INTP Road to Self-Knowledge
The critical parent is a voice in your head that will cause you to criticize yourself and others.
Enter the Cat- Chapter 1
Jade stumbled out of the kitchen approaching the mustached critic. "hello, your jade, i mean i'm jade...welcome to hut waffles...i mean waffle hut, may i take your order."
"BLEU" - Thingy
Our mindsets were hammered to be critical, adaptable, and analytical. we were also hard wired to be capable of suppressing our impulses and emotions in difficult situations.
Counter Earth Chronicles Dual Realities Chapter 20: When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can’t Find
Counter Earth Chronicles - Dual Realities **Chapter 20:** **When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can't Find.** April 7th YOE 35 7:22 PM Castle Wundagore, World One (Counter Earth) The hub news was dominated by the...