Prototype/ First story
#1 of beginning **this is my first story please be harsh in your critisiam. well here goes.** i close my eyes waiting for the blow to come. it's a perfect strike. the moment the fist colides into my jaw i am sent realing backwards.
my first story
Introduction A lot has changed in the last year after the events that changed my life but if I told you what they were then that would be a spoiler wouldn't it. So, let me start from the...
First story: A walk in the woods
#1 of a walk in the woods heres my first story. i dont plan to make a series out of this but i'll all depends on the feedback i get. so feel free to comment and give tips to help me write better.
Second Draft of First Story
(Things with weird names are in Latin, they should be in italics but it didn't transfer) It's not pleasant being struck with lightning. Neither is being trapped underwater for a minute straight. Or doing all of this while almost dying from exhaustion....
First Draft of First Story
This is the first part of my first story, which name is to be determined. this story is probably super-freaking-confusing, so just enjoy the fight scenes for now.
Teaser for possible First Story.
#1 of teaser teaser to my possible first story okay, let me tell you what i can remember up to when i woke up. i was born in new york city, march, 5th 2032, the age now know as "the beginning of the end".
Preview of My First Story
Well I've managed to get this out earlier than I expected. Do remember that this is 'very early' 'first draft' style, so the quality may not be perfect, and there are some revisions I do want to make to it. But I'd like to hear feedback and see...
Darren and Travis' first story
It was as autumn, it was cold a lot of wind, leafs falling, in this little village people lived, people who like Gut punching, some like receiving, some like giving it, Here lived some people, not that much, it was a place full of males, there lived 13...
History of the Dragon's
----this will be my first story. enjoy---- years ago in crest a land long forgotten to the world of men, lived the great species of dragon's. they lived in peace for a million years. dragon's never had wars, why would they.
your beloveds DJs' first story.
#1 of adventures of dj roxyfox i hope you all enjoy my first story,i will get better at writing as i go on. the year is 400 b.c, times were now in the roman age and weapons were becoming popular.
this is my first story comments requested
story i awoke after my first day at my new house.
Project Luna - Subject Omega
(this is my first story i am just looking for comment but not on the way i have it written