Respawn (re-post, correct)
She was too shaken to correct herself that time. "she should be, but she's not. i've never seen anything like it." when she did talk, she talked fast. "i don't know how to even put it, it might be easier to just show you."
Course Corrected (Act1, Book2, Chapter18)
"despite a lot of the changes i made, the world course-corrected. and here i am, dying in this field just like i saw it the first time." "how did it end in the prediction you witnessed?"
Course Correction (Otherwise Untitled)
#65 of short stories admiral sligh orders a course correction for the fleet, after hearing unfortunate news.
I, Dacien -- Chapter Twenty: Displacement -- CORRECTED CANONICAL VERSION
But he had wanted to show it -- show it off, chelm corrected himself instantly -- to kanail.
Five of them One of me (corrected a little)
#1 of five of them one of me corrected adult content this is the same story as, five of them one of me. but i corrected it some. i'm not a professional writer so there are going to be mistakes. i want y'all to tell me about my mistakes.
A New Adventure
A young boy, whom had just come of age, traveled the lands in search for adventures. His first stop was to the Professor's to get his travel companion and guardian. His young, energetic brown eyes scoped the lands as he traveled to avoid potential...
Love and Trust
"he's correct, garde." she said. "you need not bear mismagius an egg. this is for you and you alone." gardevoir looked down at her feet again. "i wanted my first to be special." she numbly said. "but..." "we can't all get what we want." azure said.
Teal
The mid-autumn wednesday was cool and the air was crisp like the leaves covering lawns and roads alike. The streets were busy with the hubbub of everyday life, people driving between jobs or just to and from. The pokemon world had changed forever a few...
Scy-zing up the Differences
Three weeks have gone by, many battles have too. Jason, a young trainer walked side by side with his to Pokèmon Champ and Clair, both being Charmeleons. He found that the male/female attitudes definitely showed differences from the two genders. Champ...
A New Lifestyle
This is my first story that I have made, there is more done, and my friend has edited a bit already, I would love any feedback on how to make my writing better, although a bit shorter than what I would have liked, so the next parts will most likely be...
Vanguard
For these calculations to be correct, i'd have to be 3.14 light years away from my intended destination--oh. oh \*crap\*." "something wrong, 'huu-mahn'? perhaps altering my body was not to your liking? would you like to convert something else?"
The UAA Chapter Three: Defense Breaker
The UAA Chapter Three: Defense Breaker. Story and Characters © Michael .B [Max The Wolf (YS) LT\_Max\_W\_Charger (FA)] Disclaimer: no one to read unless you are over 17, 18, or 21 depending on where you live in this world....may contain...