The Gay Goth Dog: CHAPTER 15: Why Do They Pick On Huskies? (part Three))
--sai-- 'yes i know comma, comma, comma! gah teach us something new please.' i said to myself when there was a knock at the door. a german shepherd and a husky stepped in. ms. dreager looked at them funny than her face brightened up. "jeremy! hayden!"
The End :: Squeal to Furnapped::
The End Kilik wakes up in his bed with his mother and father both waiting by his bed side. He had been cleaned up and clothed again. A detective walks into the room and smiled warmly to kilik. "I see you have finally awakened." The detective...
Writing Tips
commas indicate the short pause, periods the end of a sentence. are they asking a question? are they getting excited? maybe they have odd speech patterns, you can chop words with apostrophes.
Gaid 2 riting gud: Srsly (episod 1)
Not to puzzle out byzantine arrangements of commas. this also applies to fonts, pretty colours, ridiculous file formats and every other hoop you make your audience leap through.
“Premonition” - The Day Of
"sincerely, comma, name...send." slumping against the back of the chair, he stares up to the sky, fanning himself from the last of the heat built up through the evening. footsteps from the hallway, footsteps out of time from each other.
"The Thin Line," Part PP
Enclosed stop ambassador dead comma embassy destroyed stop attaché rescued comma alive in mossford comma injuries not known stop enemy plans imminent attack on flourford comma mossford comma likely in next day stop messenger carrying intelligence documents
Curious Heat
As you already you know, our company provides its service to those female furs who are just plain and tired of having to deal with a fitful periodic heat that puts them almost in a lust-filled comma and keeps them from doing things they would normally do.
An Interview with Toumal: The SoFurry Search Function
Oh and be sure to separate tags by comma, since there are tags that have spaces in them. **heuvadoches:** great! what about the forums and groups icon? **toumal:** those are not tied in to the search function - yet.
Writer's Bloc
Apostrophe catastrophe, and speaks he does anastrophe, colon, slash and awkward drama, you forgot the oxford comma! like rabbits edits seem to breed! another book to never read! dusty stacks of total terrors: shelves alive with my missed errors!
Wander over Yonder: The Frozen Princess
Calculating likelihood of ship destruction... the original ternary readout is: unit pair pair comma unit nil nil comma unit pair pair comma unit nil nil point nil..._" sylvia growled. "will somebody shut that thing up?!"
Junior Year: Day One
"phillips comma brent?" i raised my paw and he looked up, and straight at me. his eyes glared. i felt as if they were boring into my skull. "well well... i never knew that one of your kind would be brave or stupid enough to have me as a teacher."
Writing Tips vol. 2
When the quote ends in a direct modifier to the quote, such as 'he said', you end the quote in a comma (or question mark or exclamation point, if such is the case). you don't capitalize the following word unless it is a proper noun.