How does everyone feel about my stories?
I just found myself really curious about his lately. I'm wondering how well my stories are received. I like to think I do a pretty decent job, but I could be wrong. Is there anything in particular anyone feels I need to improve on? Is there anything...
The Case of the Killer Queen (Part 1)
Feel free to critique what is here, and i will take guidance from whatever expressions are offered as to the worth of this collection of words as it stands, in determining my next move.
Science for the Sci-fi Writer: Dark Matter
This is, of course, is completely made-up, and has no basis in actual science. about a month ago, i was watching an anime on netflix entitled _harlock: space pirate_, which i gather was based on a manga series which i've never read.
A Trio
She wore a white tube top shirt which only covered her chest, and a purple jacket which ended just below the shirt and had no chance of wrapping all the way around her.
Jacks-Tail Formally Bio-Morph-One) As of 4-20-2015
This version integrates the critique from the last posting and finishes up chapter 9. the rape scene in chapter 9 has been replaced with more of a 'mental' rape as jack sucumbs to the body's instincts.
The First Human
Though this was in no means an invasion. the defenders of the brotherhood come from many worlds in the galaxy. each one pledged to serve and protect the systems within their influence.
A sample scene
Though no breeze masks the airspace, no predator waits for the wind to keep silent. in an amazon, patience is no virtue among the dense array of drooping and jutting leaves.
Accent experiment - Good or Bad?
critique mainly on the dialogue, the rest was thrown together. =( thanks!
Startopia: The Hovel of Outer Space
Val cut himself short in his introductions as he realized ulysses was no where in site. he looked around and finally down at his particle projected shoes and found the glove of ulysses sticking out from under 5 tons of scrap metal.
Great movie I miss the 70´s
I just watched Tarzoon Shame of the jungle a.k.a Jungle burger it was awesome I hadn´t laughed that hard since they stopped the re runs of the Fresh prince of Bel Air and Full house. It was a sexy Sharknado it was so bad it was hilarious my type of...
Healing
There was no telling what branches led where in the keep, no map survived that he had been able to procure. they'd already passed several branches on their way in. in all probability, some led back this way. the urn could be anywhere!
With Royalty.
no answer. she stepped in with the floor whining under her step. the room was dark, despite the light from the full moon. there at the desk, a hunched figure cast in the light of nicole's emerald glow.