Editing
Have you ever said something and realized it sounded way better in your head? Have you ever thought of an awesome comeback long after it was way too late to do anything about it? Have you ever written something on Facebook and then read it and...
The Apocalypse: Edited Version; first eight chapters.
Well, it's finally done; an edited version of the first apocalypse. most of the story remains the same, only adding a few things here and there to make it flow better. for those who have already read this story as i posted it, there's not much point in re-reading
What I've become: Safety No More, edited version
#1 of what i've become edit: i have replaced the text of the original piece with the new edited version. this version is the best that i can make it.
Making Tracks (edited version)
I noticed the footprint the other day. It wasn't like any I had seen around here, the print having crushed some of the underbrush down into the mud clearly. I started paying a little more attention each time I went out, and a few days later I found...
Spiral Nebula - Chapter 26
Unfortunately i don't think this transition was very smooth but maybe in an edit version the chapter will transition a little more smoothly. across the desert of dried up planets were the scars of the battle that took place overhead.
Bitterwall Stories - Foreword
At some point i added a second part to it, along with an edited version of the first one. however, since then a lot of things have happened. i slowly came into contact with feminism and lgbtq+ activism.
PREVIEW | Inhuman: Tender lovin’ sexytime? [09/22/12]
[**note:** here is where the optional naughty scene will begin for readers who request the "special edition" version of the book, once it's done. said scene will be entirely absent in the default version of the book.]
The Fox, The Rat and The Beast (edited and improved)
New edited version of my story this is my story proluge, i submitted it before but it was a mess, so i edited, cleaned up and improved it the evening sunlight shown through the tree top as the smell of a wilderness of pine trees
A Hope Shattered to Pieces (Chapter One)
Thanks to my not-so-furry friend jimmy for helping me continue to write out a couple things in this editted version. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_
Ambition
#4 of poetry a slightly edited version to be pg. i think you can figure out where. written 2016. what do i want?
Forest Keep 13
#15 of forest keep (edited 12/10/08 for font correction and version update) the day began with a soft rain falling from a dull grey sky. james and the other novices looked up at the clouds and sighed.
Changes in Life - Chapter 1 - So It All Begins (NEWLY EDITED SERIES)
This is a newlty edited version of the story, i'm going back over all the chapters i've written and making them more updated and "appropriate" xd if you wanna know more, comment below!
Lucario and the Aftermath: Prologue
#1 of lucario and the aftermath just an edited version of the prologue i wrote a while ago. this should be better now! ...i wake up, my vision slightly blurred, my fur being stroked lightly by the soft wind among the forest terrain.