Rocky Mountain Times (Chapter 6)
Jen woke the next morning and began her workout regime. She pulled on a pair of leggings and a tight tank top. She knocked out a few reps of jumping jacks to warm up before...
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Kept in Suspense
Subject requested to terminate contract. request denied. subject requested to terminate contract again. request denied again. **personal comments** moment of self discovery: i like saying "request denied". it makes me feel important.
First Fatality And Funeral
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Nemesis - 1 & 2
\*i just did this one when i blanked out, well, questions, comments, requests? e-mail me at [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection)\*
New Life, New problems Chapter 5
End of chapter 5. \*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\*\* this stories still young, and i'll keep adding to it for a while, leave me your comments/requests
The History Of Zato -Revision-; Demon Within
Now, anyways, i wished to address something a lot of people have commented/requested on; i do not need a proof reader. when my muse is in full swing, i proof read properly. if not, it's half-assed.
Karma Express Delivery
"actually, every single review was five stars, and many of them left comments requesting to specifically have all future packages delivered by you." "oh." kickaha paused for a moment. "wait, then. what is the problem?"